Poem -

Fragile

Fragile

Shine a light into recesses of my mind

A coherent thought you'll do well to find !

Currently inhibited by muddled thinking

Worse for wear due to enthusiastic drinking !

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I shouldn't have indulged to that degree

For now my head doesn't feel part of me !

It is throbbing brutally because of excess

When will I learn to consume fractionally less ? 

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I search for a hangover cure high and low

But nothing restores my balance that I know

So for today I must accept this is how I'll be

Politely asking all I encounter to treat me gently !

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Twisted Angel

LOL..best cure...drink water before passing out, next morning 6 nurofen and a full English brekky made by someone else preferably :)

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sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

I have a cold hangover...

I will trade your head for mine...

LOL!

Thank you for sharing...

Hug!!

sparrowsong 

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Richard Waters

Hope you feel better soon !

Take care of yourself !

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author
sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

Thank you...

Taking all the quil I can...

Daytime, Nighttime and...

To happy recovery!

Cheers!

Hug!!

:)

sparrowsong 

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Bradford

Hey Richard I remember some hangovers when I was young . Trying to get off the couch and the ceiling fan is spinning fast but actually going slow . That is when you lay back down and sleep it off .I have only had one bad hangover in my life and never have since . A great write of memories that brought back some for me .hugs to you rock 

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The Bee

Hi Richard,

this reminds me of when I was in my twenties, my hang over cure was the hair of the dog, worked for me but ......................... A vicious circle my friend. Enjoyed this just the same. Thank you Richard.

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Richard Waters

So glad you enjoyed !!!  :)

Best wishes to you !

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