Poem -
Free me with severed veins
Wipe away my existence...free me with severed veins
All is not lost, I'm pointless
Bound with devils chains
Feasting on what's within me...corrupt and blackened soul
Broken and dead so cast me
into a fire filled holeĀ
Laugh in the face of misery...self worth lost and goneĀ
Tempt me with coins of silver
We are already as one
Spawn of the devil disguise me...Thrive on hatred and sin
Lust and vanity curse me
You 'took me' and now I give in
Sanity erupts; I dESPISE you.. Bound me with devils chains
Wipe away my existence
Free me with severed veins
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Comments
Very intriguing! Great job
*Keith
Thank you for your time and support Keith, I really appreciate it...
MaddisonĀ
very nice maddison voted and nomed gr8 write x
Excellent write, My applause, My vote, My Congrats
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Maddison Law
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Sir, for your constant feed back and support, it is much appreciated
Maddison
Thank you Susan, I'm honoured to have a vote and Nom from you
Maddison
Another consistent write beautiful...vote here!..I nom there ...xx
:)
Thank you for your kind words Carey xx
Wow this is freaking awesome! I loved every single word. I also love the picture too. Nice work!
Val ā„ļø
Thank you for taking the time to read, and your comment I really appreciate it Val
Maddison
Thank you angel , I wrote this on a very dark day x
Thank you for reading and as always your genuine comments
Maddison
Hi Maddison, you write with an emotion so true, even though your linesĀ are double-edged at times and there is an ambiguity there is also a clarity in your words. Ā I feel the heartbreak and the disillusionment in your write, an emotion you convey so well. Ā Congrats on your nomination and a vote from me:)
Thank you Rachel. Always appreciate your comments
Maddison
Wow... Thank you so much x
Maddison
Excellent write Maddison !! Loved every line in this.No stones unturned..
Love
Piusha
Thanks very much:)