Poem -
You make me sick!
Take a breath, breath real slow
Let it out, the past will go
Exhale the pain and the stench
Body weakens as you wrench
The parasite...It will NOT go
I'm breathing really really slow
It crawls across my red hot skin
Through open pores, and deep within
Panic jumps upon me now
I cannot do it... Don't know how
My head is screaming my arms are torn
I wish I wish I'd never been born
Exhale the pain and the stench
Body weakens as you wrench
Loosing hope,the tears flow
Memories that won't ever go
Curling tight into a ball
Close my eyes begin to fall
Exhale the pain exhale the pain
Free me with now with severed veins
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Comments
WOW MADDISON!!.........this is powerful stuff.........great delivery...........those closing lines that were conveying the potential for suicide were unbelievably moving...........this is a terribly emotional write.........compelling as hell..........I hope this isn't taken TOTALLY from personal experience.........thanx for sharing this............ALL STARS...........your cyber-friend and admirer...........T xo
Thank you Tony
Thank you
Hi Maddison, I know why that pain is there with you and I send you my love for your suffering, always remember that I`m here for you sweetie if you need to talk! This is so sad yet so beautiful and expresses your anguish so well. I`m praying for you and sending my love to who this was written for and yourself. Stay safe and well sweetie.
Hugs and love.....G xx
Georgina...I haven't written for so long! It's so nice for you to send such supportive words. Wow A.O.M well done
Hope you are well...
Maddisonxx
Thank you Maddison for the congratulations, it was a real shock to be told, it was totally unexpected!! You know you can come to me always sweetie. I have`nt written for a while either and I`m dreading tomorrow as it`s the sixth anniversary of my sons death to cancer!
Love G xx
Yes I thought it was soon... My thoughts are with you, take care xxxxx
Thank you sweetie......G xx