Poem -
Freedom
Freedom isn't something
We should ever take for granted
It's a feeling resting deep inside
It's roots are firmly planted
From birth to death we struggle
To always do what's right
And sometimes lose our focus
The goal seems out of sight
Lose sight of what's important
Get hung up on petty things
At times forget there are some folks
Who don't have anything
Homes destroyed in an instant
Feeling terror every day
Is this the day their life will end
Ruthlessly snatched away?
The real measure of one's freedom
Is buried deep in our soul
Reach down deep every single day
Be thankful of your role
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Β Hi Jack Great words of wisdom my friendΒ
We should be as you say thankful for out role inΒ this worldΒ
and stop worrying about the petty things that are not importantΒ
Great write Love n hugs Debs Β xx
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You are sweet as usual, my dear Debs!!! Love, Jack xxx
awesome Jack. just something I noticed. reread the first two lines out loud. it's your poem and you can phrase it how ever you want but it would make more sense without the double negative. Isn't and never are a double negative. ;)
Thank you dear Lisa... I have corrected it! Much appreciated for catching that!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx
yes freedom is very important like it linda
Dear Linda... you always make me feel special!!! Thanks... love, Jack xxx