Poem -

Frozen

Frozen

I fell to my knees, the hurt that encroached upon my soul

No more could I breath,why had my gracious God my saviour forgotten me? Why had he forgotten my son?

My body ached battered and broken by my own emotions,as if my essence was a sea that had ran dry 

My eyes swollen and sore, heavy weight ..heavy heart ..I could go on no more

For a body with no soul is good for the taking ,I can't carry on my soul is breaking 

Be strong for my son , he's in there he's near , but to look at him empty I couldn't bear

He's frozen..please hear me ...I need you my boy ,

I can't go on without you I'd rather die!

I need him...he is me...he is my soul... my body is weakened I feel so cold

My lord can you hear me ? Please answer my prayer

Can you see what I see ?

I know he's there!

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Jason Brown

Can you see what I see?
I know he's there!

This is heartrending!!

J ;)

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Cat Wilson

This is very deep and you can feel the emotions in it very well done

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