Frozen
Like 7 Pin it 4Icicles hang
Temporarily melted by low winter sun
Under the pristine crystal skies
You and I hung
ยCrystalline...
Like metamorphosing butterflies
Webs of intricate thoughtย
Are simultaneously spunAt night we're stunned
By the unfiltered cosmosย
In its ultimate wisdomNo pressure of life
No consequence of decisionยThe stars are the headlampsย
Resurrected by the crisp air
We are the paralysed and mystifiedย
The rabbits in the cross hairs
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Grateful...
We care not, the why, when nor howTime and emotions areย frozen
Starstruck..You and I
Lazily gliding through the mirrored still oceanWhat wisdom lingers here?ย
In the pauses between thoughts...
What currents guide us here?
My fellow cosmonauts
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Comments
Absolutely STUNNING!!......... poetic webs of philosophical truisms!!...... the phrasing here is SO well considered.... and so thematic that it begs for a counter-referencing!! ~
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ~ "We are the paralyzed and mystified
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย The rabbits in the cross hairs...."
How I Love what you have to convey poetically!!.... Feed me!! Feed Me!!.......I LOVE your stuff dear poet-brother!!........ALL STARS!! ~ PINNED!!........a FINE piece of poetic fringe writing!!....... stay groovy!!...... your cyber-friend and admirer!!........ Tony xo........?โด?
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Thank you Tony. Your comments are always awesome. This poem is partly inspired by the dreadful weather sweeping across the US.
Stay safe and warm. - Syd xoย
A piece ofย art nice angel
Thank you so much for lovely comment Angel. Stay safe in that polar vortex.
- Sydย
Your very welcome angel I am staying warm insideย
great write Syd. warm regards.
Thank you Cleo. I appreciate you reading and leaving feed back. I often struggle for time but I'll make an effort to read more of your work.
- Sydย
wow Sydย why have I not noticed how brilliant you are before nowย :)
It's comments like this that keep me writing. The answer to your question is that I often write from experience...if I'm feeling stressed or down then it comes out in my writing.
Now and again I'll write something half decent.
Thank you for the uplifting comment.
- Sydย
Syd, absolutely fantastic mate. Being warm looking through windows we can get the beauty of winter. Having to go to the shops a very different matter. Really like this, pinned,
Nigel
Ha ha yes. I see exactly where you're coming from Nigel. Thank you for reading and leaving feed back. I appreciate the pin.
Take care - Syd
I adore the cadence and imagery, this is why you are amongst my favorite writers.
Thank you so much Lisa. I've been really struggling for time with work commitments lately. I'll stop by your page when I get time. I'm off to bed now. I always appreciate you reading and leaving feed back.
- Syd xoย
My Dear Friend Syd,
This poem, to me, is the best one I have ever read by you.
It is powerful, and loaded with beautiful passion.
I don't pin many, but this one I certainly did.
Congratulations on your masterpiece.
Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you so much for your kind comment Larry. I'm glad you enjoyed this one so much.
Peace and love - Syd xxxย