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The day that she remembers
Was the day it fell apart
A note to say goodbye
A note that tore her heart
It broke her life in two
She was wounded and so lost
The tears fell down like snowflakes
Her heart encased in frost
And so no love could touch her
Was the ice queen from that day
No warmth from any person’s arms
Could melt that pain away
She rebuffed all men’s attention
Didn’t care for misplaced charm
No one would dare to love her
All she’d do is wish them harm
A woman that once lived and loved
Hated men for all her worth
She wandered through her path of life
A lost soul upon this earth
‘Til the ice one day began to melt
Her hard exterior exposed
What was this sudden ray of sun
A warmth it now imposed
She no longer felt a harshness
In her heart or in her soul
This light that now transpired
Left her complete; half of a whole
And as the ice rained downwards
A deluge of hurt and pain
But this man was not for leaving
Hung around; walked through the rain
The rainbow grew above them
She the clouds; and he the sun
With him now by her side
Happy times had now begun.
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Rachel Gardiner,
A Strong write dear Poetess Rachel Gardiner,
Regards & Love
My vote and My nomination, Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks Willy, very much appreciated:)
Just beautiful. Love G xx
Thanks Georgina, so glad you liked:)
Hi Rachel,
Congrats, a lovely poem indeed, you sure have my vote.
Cheers
Thanks Shirley, your kind comments are much appreciated:)
Rachel, you nearly got me in tears, great write, i know that ice wall so well.
It just has to be a 5 a women or not.lol.x
Ah, thanks Mark, so glad you liked, and thanks for the high 5 lol, much appreciated:)
Beautiful penned uplifting write MY ice queen x;) 5*s and a Nom from your number 1 fan X:)
Thanks for your kind comments Jason, and your 5*s much appreciated:)
Wow Rachel and, as always, a poem of beauty, from one of the best in the business, a life at the rainbows end and beyond, all realities of life and love, now beyond "dreamt," expectations, are now, attainable "concrete," realities.......A powerful poem all the way through, and it appears that, even the,(grown to be ), "coldest hearts," can be penetrated and re-acclimate themselves, especially when the heart, begins to speak, the "combustion" of the "central" soul. Forever, once again, being the subject, to the most, sought out emotion, in our possessions,(lil) black book, of "LOVE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,," Always the strongest remedy around........ But really enjoyed this wonderful poem, an extremely well written, piece of literary art and well told story... This is a intense, yet heart melting, told story, of a managerial heart coming face to face with the persistence of the hottest, of all and any, dates,(the sun).... lovely piece of poetry by a queen of poetry and friend at heart....
Kind regards, Mrs.(J.G.)
Jim
Jim, your comments are always so profound and so hearwarming. You make anyone who you comment on feel really good about their work. A very generous man in heart and spirit, and so kind with your words. Much appreciated Jim as always:) Rachel
Love the journey to a happy ending ...
Maddison
No matter what the journey entails to get there, I 'always' believe in happy endings! Thanks for reading hun:)
beautiful write faved x
Thanks hun, so glad you liked:)
Heya Rach :)
Thought I had already commented on this...I know I already read it but enjoyed it even more 2nd time round!!
I just connected with these lines immensely....another top shelf write babes..Big votes and a nom from moi! xx
Hi Carey,
Your comments are ones that I always look out for hun; you writing is wonderful, so your feedback is always much appreciated. I think everyone likes a love story lol, and nothing like the love of a good man to break down those icy walls lol! Your kind words are much appreciated hun:)x