Geysers
Dedicated to Gwen
Vapers,
Like paper
Luna
Change view.
Dark side,
Sunrise
It`s circling soon.
Your perspective,
A frame of reference,
Forget the cues.
Wind whistles, solum stares
Who cares? It`s true.
I`m always on edge...
Tight rope,
Checking my phone.
Scuffed shoes - I`m alone,
In a crowd, on the street
The awareness hits home
I forget I`m in clothes
I notice things, like a drone
Forget my name, just the same
Perform - a Trueman show
"Good afternoon. Good evening and goodnight"
Explaining the meaning, explain the fright
Of purpose make might.
Intriguing...
What a
Profound. Impact - gleaming
Rather distract
My mind from the space
Which cant be exact
Give in to that place.
Lenses retract.
Bigger picture.
Big deal.
Hot vapers.
Yet I`m still swimming.
Like a Fish of the Sea
I know I don't usually do an outro like this however, this one was special to me...
Thank you Gwen for your kind words and support, inspiring me and challenging me to keep writing!! And thank you all for your continued support of my work.
I know I don't comment too often sorry! But I`m gonna try and change that soon!!!
Kind regards,
Max
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Comments
I`ll be back to comment a bit later! Studies call...
Max, what can I say! WOW, I feel very pampered today, thank you for that 🙏 The pace of this piece reflects how a poets brain is constantly fixating and routing deeply within the many facets of life, and their surroundings. My brain hardly shuts up. I always find it fascinating reading other people’s poems and writings. Because people fascinate me. We are all such complex, yet beautiful beings. I can’t express enough of how grateful I am for the dedication of this piece. There are so many wonderful writers here, that bring me such comfort in the day.
Max life is busy, and you have plans. It’s never about quantity of time, the fact you make time when your life is currently so demanding, that is a wonderful gift you give us all. Because when you do give it, you provide quality, attentive feedback. I always look forward to hearing from you and especially reading your work, for which you don’t give yourself enough credit for. But maybe that humble side of you just makes you shine that bit more. I always believe we all have room to learn. And on here I find I can learn a lot from you lovely folk. Even if it’s all virtual on a screen. I did love that Truman nod lol
and with that “have a good day, good evening and good night”
Oh and you are more than a simple fish in the sea Max. Maybe more a Blue Whale 🐳 because many on here think you are a GREAT poet
Your rosey cheeked friend 😳
Gwen ❤️x 😊
Awwww... Gwen, your words touch me. But a dedication well deserved. I'm really glad that you enjoyed its pace and style, although I do go on tangents. I really think it shows in your comment, how much you love people, how genuine Gwen!!! Really Gwen, your kind words mean so much but I doubt that I can express it in the quality you have ;). Gwen, we got heaps to learn from each other! That's what I live about Cosmos!!! Thank you for the barrage of comments now I'm the one feeling pampered XD. Keep being awesome my friend, I look forward to reading your next work! Kind regards. Your friend Max
Oh God...the trueman show!! Personal meaning...are we?? Sometimes I wonder. Deep lonely write Max which unfortunately I understand...wish I didn't...hugs 💕
Ahhh thank you Marion, and yes sometimes it does feel that way... I feel like everyone else is in on it.... glad you enjoyed and thank you for your support my friend~
Hey Max. I read it twice. Great punchy style at the beginning.....and its like u on a spiritual journey from start to finish. Fab write. Lovely dedication to our wonderful Gwendoline, who has already fast become another one of my favourite poets! And you included! Have a great day (studying of course)!! Pxx
Ahhhh, yes, I tried to change the flow as it went on... XD, a journey of thought no less! But thank you P, so much for your kind words and support, the Cosmos is full of inspiring poets eh? And just so you know you are also high on my list ;). Kudos P, hope to catch up on your works soon! Your friend Max
Oooh u soothes my soul reading this Max my lovely 💕⭐️💕
Ahhh! Glad you liked it Jill, I know my poems dont always hit the mark... ;)
💕❤️💕
Liked the pace and the content... It resonated with me... !! I can relate.
and as for fish in the sea... you are an uncommon species...treasure...
laraine
Ahh thanks Laraine!! Yes its seems like us poets are a different breed eh? I'm touched that you think I'm unique! Thanks for your words and support. Peace and smiles to you. Your friend Max
I was meaning to comment on this but got drawn away and it went out of my mind until now so I apologise for that. Lovely of you to dedicate this to Gwen. Your writing gets better and better. This is pretty deep, Max and well done on making us think 🌷x
Ahhh no problem Tina, at least you're not like me!!! Disappears for days on end... Glad you think I`m improving in my work, though I`m at a crossroads creativity wise at the moment... like a drought... hmmm... XD. Thanks for your kind words and support as always!! Your friend, Max
what!!! the man of liquid in a drought? write about drought! XD..............Jim
XD... perhaps Jim... perhaps...
Studies going well for you I hope.
I hope you get two.. true callings.
Ahhh, well, they are going... seems like I have to work hard for my marks, but I already knew that XD, especially in engineering... thank you so much for asking Liliana. Peace and smiles to you!!!
Max a great tribute and fathomless write to good Gwen and apologies for being late to this party.
And you recently mentioned a drought/writers block, well my friend after reading your kind tribute you certainly could fool me.
For there is so much on offer your superb and unique imagination bestows for all.
And for your good self to branch off on, so many eclectic themes.
Simply, hang in there Max and Gwen the great and good poet she is, so thoroughly deserves your thoughtful homage.
Ahhh thanks, Shaun! Twas a deserving tribute indeed! Gwen has really come out of the blue and supported so many of us on Cosmos. But I reckon you`re equally deserving my friend. Thanks for backing my corner! But alas, these days the words are few and far between. Though I do enjoy reading and commenting, I find inspiration here, especially in your work ;). Peace to you my friend. Please keep writing! I`ll catch up on Cosmos after my exam today... Smiles!
Max how right you are when mentioning good Gwen and what she brings to poetries table.
And I'm there for you my poetry brother and just for the record the words are never few and far between for a captivating writer as your good self.
Maybe all it takes is just the right word or even image to get those creative juices flowing and I know you're studying these days, so the law of averages proves your superb train of thought is elsewhere my friend.
And good luck on that educational aspect.
Stay frosty sharp and remain poetry enriched my friend and tomorrow night there'll be a poem upped with your name attached to it and to make your heart beat a little faster.
For you deserve it my good friend.
Aww thanks so much, Shaun! Peace to you my friend. I`ll be back in the arvo!! Promise~
Max just revisiting here and yes it still vibes and remains fresh as ever.
And yes again, for we all miss Gwen and many more who uploaded sheer quality.
The best to grace here in my book- are women.
Women of substance when poetry calls and daresay an inner strength they all carry to see that through.
I miss Gwen, I miss Cheri and I miss Lodigiana and many more.
For they write superbly crafted poems.
Will catch up on your latest three offerings tomorrow Max (it's late here right now about 1.20 A.M ( A sleepy M!!) and will aim to reach out for your very first offering, in the meantime peace to you and respect as well.
Nos da Max.
Shaun :)
Haha you liked this one didn't you mate! I too miss my fellow poets, but then again, in some what of a self centred way, it's not their poetry that I look forward to discovering, it's my own. Thank you for your kind comments, I've had a busy weekend so far but got some minutes on the train to catch up. As always hope you are well mate. Sincerely, your friend Max