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Ghosts In Traffic 10-20-16

Ghosts In Traffic      10-20-16

I'm gonna speak about a feeling
The one where you realize your gonna crash
A lot of things run through your head
Like if your gonna survive the bash

First thing I thought aboutΒ 
Was the other guy stopped at the light
I hope I didn't ruin his life
I hope he makes it out of this alright

And I thought about my son
And hoped I didn't leave him like my father left me
I didn't want an unfortunate repeatΒ 
For him of my life long tragedy

And I thought of my girl
And how it was her carΒ I was driving
I thought of letting her down
Left my eyes red from crying

I'm humiliated and my nerves are a wreck
I've done what I swore I'd never do
But now I'm a car crash survivor
Though a little black and blue

I feel I've done the best I could
At least I didn't hurt anyone
Only my self and I feel I deserved it
This is not any fun

But instead of sulking on the bad
I will focus on the fact I survived it
And didn't become another soul
Who's ghost is lost amongst the traffic

One thing is different between me and my dad
His crash he died
And through all of this storm
At least I survived

By LukeCoomer (c)

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sparrowsong

Hello Luke...

I have been in a couple of wrecks and from the outsideΒ it looked like someone didn't survive that...

I have seen some that didn't look that bad, but yet there were fatalities...

I don't feel comfortable wearing a seat belt and I think it's because if it jams and the car catches on fire...

I Β want to be able to get out...

I don't want to have to pay a high dollar ticket and stand before the judge as to why I wasn't wearing my seat belt...

I wear it 'cause it's the law here...

But, I know when you do it right it can kill you too...

I guess it's better to hear your loved one was killed, but they were wearing the seat belt...

Thank it isΒ to hear they weren't wearing one...

You want to keep kids safe, but if you can't get them out...

Every accident has different results...

Great write!Β 

Vehicles can be replaced...

People can't be...

Thank you for sharing...

Glad you're ok...

Very sorry about your Dad...

Hugs...

sparrowsongΒ 

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Luke Coomer

If you lovely ladies get the feels over this one about my dad you should read inquiry it on here but I'm not sure if you've seen itΒ 

and thanks I'm still hurting from the crash but I did survive and now I've broken the cycle

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