The Girl I Now Am
Been hurt once before so it's hard to trust again hard to be the lover and the perfect friend hard to let go I'm driving myself crazy trying to move forward but my visions kinda hazy I've got to let go and I've got to do it now but I don't know if I want to I really don't know how I wanna lift my head up been hanging way to low who I am now this girl I just don't know been way to hard on the girl I wanna be I should just be happy simply being me I used to know no worries I was happy everyday never had the tears or the words that I now say I know my self esteem is shot but I'll make it through as long as I have faith and I believe that it is true I may not have the power to turn back the hands of time but it certainly does feel good to express myself in rhyme♡
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ashley pacheco
Your theme seems to be bit scattered.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI
Thank you for that, I believe your right :-)
Beautiful! It actually reminds me a lot of the type of poems I write =]
Thank you :)
You're welcome =] I just hope you can get your self esteem up past the sky. How come it's not already, I do not know why. Cause you're just as beautiful as your rhymes =]
Thank you jeff that was very sweet just the thing I needed a special treat I'm much happier now the past is in the past I have so much to look forward to that make these smiles last !:)
Ashley :)
Welcome beautiful!...
Maybe scattered thoughts come from hard times???
I love your write...:) Â Sometimes ...most times...putting it out there gets you to the place you need to be...No right or wrong way..I see a beautiful soul in this piece..Thanks for sharing this as I hope to see more of you...A vote from me :)
Love Carey x:)
Thank you so much Carey I really appreciate that!. Honestly I think I put so much feeling and emotion in it that I didn't really check to see if it was properly written. I am super happy you can appreciate it as much as I did and boy it feels so good to express myself this way :-)
hahaha that was awesome! lol rhyme communication! But good they better last or ill come down there and kick their little ass! lol
Lol haha your awesome!
Ashley :)
I forgot to say I'm putting this up for a nomination...:)Â
A big reason for me that this deserves to be nominated is the fact that I saw all you were writing about and then your reply on my comment ...
When I first read your write I saw it was straight from the heart...emotions are not planned...so why would an emotional write have to sound a certain way...You told it how it is and that's what I got!
Love that...Be raw...Be real! x:)
Carey x
Wow!!:)) thank you very much :)) that is really awesome :) what a great way to start my morning hehe:) and I will Def continue to write from the heart! :))
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you very much :))
Congratulations on you nomination
It's well deserved
Maddison