Go ahead
The woe full task, that half full glass.Β
That sucks and blows leaves you indisposed.Β
The fate that seems extremely difficult to adapt to.Β
No one of this caliber should have an ending undeserved.Β
And yet it is so, paths are easy to find if you're looking you know,Β but (what) gets in the boggle of emotions.Β
And promotes tell tale signs of an end undeserved.Β
For she fought the intruders and relied on common sense.Β
Told the truth at all expense.Β
Why this I'll fate, why this presence.
And nothing to do, that would stop this taking over you .Β
Headaches indeed, but she wasn't a rotten, just tarnished and torture torn.Β
I guess she was meant to live the life unfair.. to see how much one could take .Β
But she did nothing but ask, surely there's been a mistake.Β
She was good, but who would care.Β
The abuse compounded until she was out of here.Β
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Wow LILIANA!!...I could feel anger and disappointment in this piece....and along the way some VERY compelling phrasing ~
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β ~ That woe full task, that half full glass
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β That sucks and blows, leaves you indisposed..."
CLEVER phrasing dear poet sister and an awesome beginning for a poem!!......ALL STARS!!....ever the pleasure!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoΒ :Β )
I like the way it sounds out loud.
Loud and clear the anger of the unfair.Β
I hope others also howl at the moon.Β
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