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Here i am , hopefully victorious for  peace ✌ ✨. 
As i  submit submitting letters to the powers that be , that for some strange persistent reasoning of resistance they choose me .

If fairer and sustainable are key , where does leave the submissive me 
Will it be dark and drewery , a case of the what ever will be will be ? .
If it's possible ill try  to  pull it off .

👋 Hello, hallo and tenakautau katoa . 
please excuse my language as have only one Indigenous tongue .

A language of peace in every holistic mind , aspects of grandure in  line with the evolution and diversity at it's core .
Submissive  if making a point👉.
If tipping point is extinction or peace. 
I want life to continue.  
To clear the air around here , of any unkind , that to me promptly promotes a clarity quote ✌un quote peace of mind .

 

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Shaun Cronick

Liilana welcome back and so good to see you haven't lost your thought provoking touch and hitting poetry ground running here.
And with regard to questions raised, hope for the best and plan for the worst, springs to mind  and  it's so easy to say isn't it?
Well balls to that old adage, do it your way, live it your way, refuse to accept any negativity in life and all its myriads thrown at you.
Use everything within yourself to see you through.
For peace on mind is essential and more importantly, achievable.
Never submit.
Compelling to read you again and I wish you well.
Shaun x
 

 

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Liliana of the ...

Easier said than done , but nice centament dear Shaun  . 
the problem with your statement is there's nothing within me anymore,  totally destroyed the doctors said when they informed me that I'll never ever ever be anything near what  I'd consider female .
thanks for your kindnesanyway,  much appreciated.  

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Marion

It's good to see you back Lilianna and this is a great piece of work x

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Yiyan Han

Dear Liilana,
My belated regards, and do wish you well.
Hope time will heal.
Yiyan

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John Loopstra

I am with you, though I'd rather say go slow with the flow, being submissive has not done me well in youth. A language of peace, where can I go study and be its prophet in these darkening days. I also like the use of emoji's, reminds of e.e. cummings' poetry (did my thesis on his poems). Trust in ❤️and 🤗 and be kind to yourself and your ancestors -  forgive (u need not forget) all (i pitied a stepsister recently, 20 years after she took her life and 40 years after the days we lived under one roof, so patience pays out in the end). Hope u feel better 6,5 months later😂💪

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