Poem -
Don't worry Lillith will tell you.
The horrors of truth and rights.
You have the right to remain suffering beings silenced in pain.Β
To have judgment undeserved.Β
The right to be disturbed.Β
To know of the bitter and be force feed more.Β
To wake up with scars you didn't do.Β
To have every one disagree with you.Β
You have the right to be the horrible truth.Β
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Comments
I like the style in which you penned this. Brings even more power to your words. A clever write xΒ
Thank you for noticing that in the middle darkness,. I put forth, on a blood soaked handkerchief.Β
That there is compassion.Β
Your a person I look forward to.Β
Please stay who you are and live forever in others minds due to your love and dedication.Β
I agree with G about the style....and I also like the way this is formatted.....bringing a kind of compelling climax to those final three lines!!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......the truth ALWAYS works!!.....well penned!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoΒ : )
I believe in the brutal truth , love her scars that disappear when people see her as beautiful not beaten nor broken.
Like nanny Mc fee.Β
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cool write Liliana! "agency is hard to watch!"...........................................Jim
Yes Jim the agents must go into hell.Β
And sometimes there's a ghost in the world that changed every time thing a era in the system that got a emotional reaction to the acts of the professional assholes.Β
And said stop.Β
Thank you for saying all you do.Β
Congrats on the new.Β
God Liliana...so raw so powerful a write. It really cuts the reader ...perhaps because...particularly regarding mental health...these words are true...sometimes things are 'done' to people against their will in their own 'best interests'...hmmmnnn....hugs lovely one X
Yes cry cry.Β
I'm not an idiot or a person who wouldn't understand if given a chance to have a say.Β
But all I hear is that it's too late, nothing you can do about it now.Β
Tough.Β
And I'm exhausted trying to be what they call normal.Β
Keep well and safe my dear friend.Β
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Liliana...we are all normal...there is no such thing as not normal...there are only people who refused to be confined to the boxes of society...and in my book variety is the spice of life...love who.you are...fuck the rest x
Can't accept what's left of the carnage and mutilation others did, using the so called diplomatic, Hiprocratic oath.
have done to what I once called my body.
Great thought thou.Β
Maybe inΒ the realm of never land that doesn't exist. I might be some kind of cadaver.Β
Useful for other purposes at least.Β
Oh well another ground hog day tomorrow.Β
Thank you for your assistance and love.Β
I value you forever.Β
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God...you sound so broken...I'm sorry...sending love to you...keep writing...I have found it to help...at least a little...
xx
Yes agreed.Β
such beauty in the darkness of your words.