Poem -

Go In Peace (revised) with YouTube video

 You gemini. I was made of stone there was no comparing this gem and I. You Mount Rushmore, you got many faces which one was your good side. This shit was for the birds it was the only way I was letting it fly. I watched our ship sailed without a goodbye. I took the bowlines cause you looked tired. I mean I made the knot, you thicken the plot and we got tied. Difference is now I cut ties. I tell myself I know the truth so I can’t listen to you tell me lies. Take that shit to the books people love reading fiction where they bury lives. I knew my worth and had my stock rise. Now I just sit praying to god to see more blue skies. Cause I can’t get mad to see that things not how they supposed to be. Like my life a movie I made it but don’t like what got shown to me. Treating me like I wasn’t there before he got conceived. Back when you thought friendship would grow up trees. Grown some height I shine some light to see you pulling the leaves. You cold hearted, all started when you first met with me. I played it smart, stayed till dark and yet couldn’t see. That you’re one of those magic tricks I pull your card you had something o your sleeve. Done my dirt but I got done dirty thinking how low can you go to this human being. 6 feet. I thought with you around you’d change my frown but you sugar coated that’s what I get for thinking shit sweet. I wish we had social distance then cause you’re a virus, made my chest tighten up way before COVID-19. I laid unconscious unresponsive your respond was let me kill him so he can go in peace. And it’s killing you to know at first you didn’t succeed. You tried again but got left plain you’re going down it was your time to bleed. It was 8 years a slave until I was freed. When you thought go in peace I thought I’d go indeed then walk right outta your life cause to stay I won’t beg or plead. I’ll just go in peace. 

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Marion

Very interesting write Davion, full of angst and endings almost, nice write ?

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Davion Tinlsey

Yeah this poem is specifically made to feel that way. I had a lot of anxiety and sadness writing this cause when I wrote it I was writing it to let go of someone. If you watched the video thank you I will be posting a meaning video soon the story behind it is up tho

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Marion

Your meaning came through very well in your words, Davion, for me it's all about 'feeling' the words, I felt yours ?

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