Poem -
God is a weapon
It's easy to die
Not so easy to live
Conscious so easily tarnished
Broken promises are made
Fall of an era
Never seemed so real
Eyeful faces
Awry insides
Damnation already here
False are validated
Salvation never seemed so unreal
God is a weapon
In the hands of amiss
Children worthy of blade
Only bullets go straight
To make a honest point
Matter of life
Doesn't matter anymore
PayamSafiri
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I like your poem, but I have to disagree with the statement of Heavenly Father being a weapon. When we pull away from Him, He leaves us to our "agency" or our own choices, in which we many times choose to destroy each other. Heavenly Father is a God of love! Perhaps I misunderstood. Cool write! looking forward to more thought provoking writes!...........Jim
As I said before sir, it is just a poem and definitely NOT A STATEMENT... I don't know what your problem is... and I have to say I disagree with absolutely everything you say... I'm sure many people here have the same opinion as me saying that: We are here for some poems and nothing else, specially not for political s**t... so with all do respect sir, I don't think you should be here saying all of that gospel nonsense...
sorry for the language but my patience has limits... I hope that you can find another platform to share your provoking religious thoughts with like minded people, not here and not under my post... I wish you the best
Enjoyed P! Conflict, such a terrible thing, occurs just to win an argument. Why do the arguers never have to pay with their lives I wonder? Resonating write
Thank you... 😊🙏🍻🌹
there is a lot to say about the world but it is too sad to even start...