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Gone

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Bekah Terlizzi

I know I'm not her.
You said I had nothing to worry about, that everything was fine.
You, yourself told me, that I was so much better than her. 
I thought you were happy. 
I knew you were happy. 
Just not with me, but with her instead.

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Abandoned Gone Hurting
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Tony Taylor

Succinctly powerful piece BEKAH!!.....conveying the pain of feeling emotionally abandoned beautifully!!......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo

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