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Good vs Bad (guess who won)

Good vs Bad (guess who won)

Ive come along way, im now 28 years of age, been through the battles, an im still here to tell the tales, a strong mind never fails, got to be hard as nails, never let the demons enter your brains, there only here to play sick games, cant defeat a positive mind frame, i fended them off an told them there lame, so here i still stand an remain, ill never let them drive me insane

i remember being depressed, by the oppresor keepin me oppressed, but god was impressed, when i beat them like a game of chess, checkmate now guess whos been blessed, told them im not here to mess around, i wont let them put me 6 feet in the ground, no contest here to keep me hell bound

In time ive grown, watched many demons get overthrown, never mess with a dog eating its bone, it might just bite, an leave you screaming for life, body detached from feet too the dome, left for dead with no grave stone, back down to hell cos that is your home, never to return to earth to roam, in the depths of fire you burn and moan, never botherd again they left me alone

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James unsworth

Power to you too barto!!! Got to stand an fight for the cause bro ??

evil only thrives when good people do nothing about it ~

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Tony Taylor

hey JAMES!!!..... Powerful stuff here!!..... and after reading it twice I read the exchange between you and BARTO!!....and I have to say I was totally psyched to read these words ~
                           ~ " Evil only thrives when food people do nothing about it "
That's a friggin' righteous attitude man!!......LOVE IT!!....... well done...... your cyber-friend and admirer!!......T xo ?????

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James unsworth

Thank you for dropping by in the comment section tony ?? appreciated as always, good know you admire my work as well as others, our poet sisters & brothers, ive finally found some ground on this site an to have a great poet like yourself comment on a merely a beginners work is a privelage, i mean writing as always been in me but until i came to this site i see im gaining recognition for my work, like they say hard work pays off an thats excatly what i plan on doing on here, its become my personal notebook in a sense, an this spiritual stuff im talking about recently is a gateway thats opend up suddenly in my inner-self. I think my awakening as forthcome ?

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