Poem -
Haiku
Spring,when itās raining,
denies the sun itās glory,
Clouds hide acidĀ tears.
with apologies Ā to experienced Haiku writers..my first ever attempt so not even sure it is correct but will keep trying!!!Ā
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That made me laugh ! that's pretty much like life isn't Ā it? if we never tried anything new we would still be living in caves...Thanks for the positive comments and I will keep at it - albeit in a wobbly way!!Ā
Lodigiana xĀ
Dear Lodigiana,
A brilliant attempt and success on your first Haiku. Ā I give you one in it's response.
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In darkness hidden
The sad soul sobs in silence
Amidst acid rains
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Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Dear Larry, what a lovely response!!! Ā The challenge is to incorporate so much into so few words and you have done that my friend!
Lodigiana x
Dear Lodigiana,
All inspired by you!
Larry xxx