Poem -
Haiku
Spring,when it’s raining,
denies the sun it’s glory,
Clouds hide acid tears.
with apologies to experienced Haiku writers..my first ever attempt so not even sure it is correct but will keep trying!!!
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That made me laugh ! that's pretty much like life isn't it? if we never tried anything new we would still be living in caves...Thanks for the positive comments and I will keep at it - albeit in a wobbly way!!
Lodigiana x
Dear Lodigiana,
A brilliant attempt and success on your first Haiku. I give you one in it's response.
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In darkness hidden
The sad soul sobs in silence
Amidst acid rains
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Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Dear Larry, what a lovely response!!! The challenge is to incorporate so much into so few words and you have done that my friend!
Lodigiana x
Dear Lodigiana,
All inspired by you!
Larry xxx