HAPPiLY NEVER AFTER
Cocooned... Naivety locked inside
A veil of innocence... Worn with pride
Take me now to be your bride
Hearts as one... I'm mesmerised
To a magical land... I'll happily roam
Isolation lost; no longer alone
The bowels of the earth; no longer my home
My sacrifice? It's ME you'll own
Grass always greener on the other side
All I wanted? 'To be that bride!'
Ghost train from hell; I hitched that ride
Fantasy's forgotten. Dreaming died
Iridescent wings; lifeless and frail
Rings bound us together; imaginary jail
Passionless, weary, skin thin and pale
Honour, obey. No release on bail
The fairy tale ends, it wasn't for me
Even though...I'm a nominee!
The winner is... For this years BAFTA
'The Fairytale- Happily Never After!'
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Thank you my friend x
I agree with Angel, a wonderful piece Maddison. Such a creative idea and fantastical imagery that embraced the whole sad emotion. A great ending by the way, perfect, a winning performance. Loved it! A vote and nom from me:)
Thank you Rachel :) makes me happy to get comments like that off you xx
Dear Maddison Law,
An excellent write, Beautiful lines, I love it.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you for your kind words they are much appreciated
Maddison,
Just beautiful hun!...Had to give this a big 5*...Loved the whole poem from start to end x Nothing beats fantasy imagery for me :)
Carey,
I haven't really written like this before, using a fantastical image, but this picture was so inspiring thought I'd give it a try ...so thankyou for lovely words of encouragement
Maddison
lovely congrats x
Thank you Susan x
Thank you for reading, and your comments they mean a lot
Maddison
Maddison,
A trip to wonderland you took us all on and thanks to you neither of us felt alone...A fantasy, fairy tale that captivated all readers and as you we too were held captive in your world of imagination, although not only by you but by your poem as well....My lines of interest, although the entire poem took me away are as follows:
Grass always greener on the other side
All I wanted? 'To be that bride!'
Ghost train from hell; I hitched that ride
Fantasy's forgotten. Dreaming died...
Iridescent wings; lifeless and frail
Rings bound us together; imaginary jail
Passionless, weary, skin thin and pale
Honour, obey. No release on bail...
Sincerely,
Jim
Thank you for sharing your lines of interest Jim
thanks for your time
Maddison
absolutely brilliant! Loved the ending...
Thank you for reading..
Maddison