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HAPPY

HAPPY

We could have been so happy

Our life mapped within the stars

I, the lady from Venus

You the man from Mars

So why’d you drop your bombshell

Come and rain on my parade

Two planets set to self destruct

Disintegrate and fade!

You knew what you were doing

Placed your hand down on that key

Countdown to my heartache

One hit: YOU devastated ME

Left me with the fallout

Choking truth; I couldn’t breathe

I was hurt and I felt desolate

How could you up and leave?

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But you did; and now I’m here

Sitting up with renewed pride

No longer need approval

From my fears I will not hide!

Cos your Mars it ain’t that hot!

Let’s face it; Venus upped and went

Our love for one another

Had been drawn out; dragged out; spent!!

But I don’t regret a single thing

Time with you, it helped me see

Just what I realised in the end

I’m  HAPPY being me!!

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BLOSSOM

Tracy, doesn't matter if you have someone to love you or not; if you don't love yourself you'll never be happy!! :)

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BLOSSOM

WHOOP WHOOP WHOOP ....... HA HA HA !!! :)

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Random Enigma

I love the positive spin on this!  It's a really good poem

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BLOSSOM

Thank you for your comments,  I'm glad you liked :)

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Stephen Weyant

another great write rachel

thanks again for sharing

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BLOSSOM

Cheers Stephen, thanks for reading, much appreciated :)

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Jason Lee

Nice one Rach, damn he got a younger chicks lol, his loss yeah  X:)

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BLOSSOM

Guess, it was LOL :)X

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