Poem -
Hardened heart
hardened and callousΒ from the pain endured before
eyes drowned in tears that never cease to pour
gushing like a river down a mountain sideΒ
all of it caused just because you lied
each time I forgave you, you seemed to do it moreΒ
you left me heart in pieces
smeared across the bedroom floor
on that day you left me when you walked out of that door
And nowΒ my heart won't ever beat the way it did before
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Do you read a lot of Roger McGough? I'm not asking that because you're from Liverpool...but there's the faintest echo of his essence in your work. Or maybe it's because the accent shines through the phrasing ... I'm not sure, yet.
Whatever it is...it's a joy to read.
J.
You captured the pain of betrayal and disloyalty in this openhearted piece Helen.Β
Nice work.....Welcome to Cosmo.
Mick.
beautiful work, the emotions read trueΒ and organic, enjoyed reading, cheers, Helen