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Helen Bassnett

Thanks Lisa

lovelyΒ to meet you andΒ aΒ merry Christmas To you too X

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Jason Brown

I know what THAT feels like!!
What would usually take me at least fourteen lines to say...YOU say in SIX!!
Kudos.

Beautifully evocative piece.

J.

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Helen Bassnett

Hi

Thanks so much for those comments they mean a lot and to answer your question I don't have the faintest idea who that fella is but I am going to check him out now.Β I love poems Always have I mostly only enjoy ones that rhyme though. MyΒ poems they just come to me at the strangest of times like whilst I was doing the dishes last night, I had to quickly just dry my hands and leg it around the house,Β scrambling for a pen and pad before I forgot all the words and I've never posted anyΒ poemsΒ online before so it's a first for me I'm glad I did though.

Thanks again

Helen

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Jason Brown

Excellent!

Sounds like the mark of a poet to me.

Keep writing. Keep posting. Keep on keeping on.

Welcome to Cosmo.

J x

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