Harrison
A poem about a guy I love so very much.
During the weekdays you awake at seven
it makes me feel like I'm in heaven
As for you know I do too
Even if you're tired you still break through
You tell me you love me and say you want to marry me
I say the same and express how I'd go over sea
Go over sea to be with the one I truly love
You make me feel like a flying dove
The days when we have our un happy times
We can always fix it with some rhymes
I call you my Harry berry
And you call me your little fairy
Today is our eight months
I can't believe I get to experience this once
As I'm with the man I love so much
Thank you for being there when I want your touch
You always cheer me up
Even when I'm in my cup
My cup of tears we see everyday
But pretend it's gone this very day
I wrote this poem to show you my love
Please never let this perfect day erupt.
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Nice write Melanie...you must have been commenting on mine while I commented on yours. You are blessed to know such love which you have written so beautifully x
Thank you for your kind words :)
Hello MELANIE!!......It is not easy to write an original Love Poem......there must be billions written by now....I like what you've done here with the A,A,~ B,B, ~ C,C, ~ rhyme scheme running throughout.....it's in that simplicity where the charm of this piece shines......the point of view of the narrator works perfectly here as well as the Love and Admiration spills onto the page with a truly honest flavor that is undeniable in its authentic voicing!!.......ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet sister....and......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Hello Melanie
This is a sweet write, doting on the pleasures a love can truly bring. Thanks for sharing your beautiful words and welcome to Cosmo :)
Awww lovely poem Melanie ❤️💕❤️🌹
Hi Melanie, what a sheer awesome write. It really reminds me of how our SO`s can really change our lives. Such a passionate write of lovers and friends. Over the years of reading poems, I think what I have learnt the most is that we are all at different stages of our journey, we all have dreams, goals and expectations. One such example that it's not about the finish line, but the steps you take to get here. Pinned. Such a lovely write.