Poem -
Haven Addicted To Hell
With no way out
Iām stuck in this placeĀ
I thought I found the way
But it was a mistakeĀ
I thought it was an exit
But it was my grave
Waiting for me to take place
In a world of hell, I drown not burn
Waiting for my life to turnĀ
I donāt feel pain only agony
So I cut deep without feeling a thingĀ
Wishing I could be a thingĀ
A thing with no life or price
Only sacrifice and meansĀ
Love is the drug that killed meĀ
Pain is the drug that healed me
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Hello REDtheCREATOR!!.......thisĀ is a very well delivered piece of 'poetic prose'......with a fine sense rhythm & timing.....the interesting thing is that you could also label this 'poetic verse' because of all the internal rhyming going on.....when you read this aloud it reads absolutely beautifully......like a song lyric speaking to theĀ trials and tribulations of lost love and the pain of addiction's agony......a very compelling read......ALL STARS!!......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......well done dear poet brother!!.....and.....in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ??ā“?ā“?
I'm A Poetess But Still This Means More Than You Know, I Really Appreciate Your Feedback. I'm Grateful You Even Took The Time To Ready My Piece. Thank You And Bless Your Soul.
Apologies dear poet SISTER!!.....I won't make that mistake again.....promise!!......?ā“ā¤
It's No Problem At Alllll??Ā