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When you feel your life is fading awayÂ
friends see how you look but have nothing to say
you feel alone isolated insideÂ
you close door and just want to hide
You feel a burdon to those close to you more you could sail out to sea and never come ashore
the clock is ticking as life passes by you look out the window and stare a the skyÂ
You pray everynight that if god is realÂ
that your last breath the big man will stealÂ
he will hold out his arms and welcome you throughÂ
to a world with no pain and a new life for youÂ

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Wow what an emotionally raw write, very relatable as I have had similar thoughts in the past . You’re never alone and your now 27 followers proves that ( 26+ me now )  I always respect a poet that writes from deep feelings and isn’t afraid to expose themself I feel that’s the only way we can change and grow . I hope you stay strong and keep writing . ~ RobÂ
Thank you i can only express myself through writting glad you feel the sameÂ
Your welcomeÂ
I'll talk to you any time! powerful write! and I believe you describe exactly what takes place! "the Savior employs no servant there"................................Jim
Powerful write...can relate to your words completely...nice write x
Wow Lorraine such a deep and emotionally driven write. The thing is, I never like to provide advice, because the internet is not the best way to get it! I'm definitely not qualified... but I have found that negative thoughts only build on one another... like a wild fire. It's about breaking the chain of thought and understanding the root of your problems not just their symptoms. Oh peace to you Lorraine, I really enjoyed the structure of this write and the flowing wordplay. You are not alone! The Cosmos is here to support you~Â
Hi Lorraine, your poem is emotionally charged and I cannot help but feel it has come from the heart. I have felt this way, like others have, in the past. Be kind to yourself. None of us know what is waiting around the next corner and sometimes it is a guardian angel. The human brain is a clever thing and, like all clever, intricate things, it gets broken sometimes. Because it is clever, though, it can also mend. I think, whenever anyone is feeling like this, it is support they need. And boy will you get support on this site! There are a lot of good people here. Please keep writing and interacting on this site and I am sure that you will see some sort of light shining through the darkness. Blessings to you ... and hugs x
Thank you everyone for your lovely commentsÂ