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Hear me

Hear me

Nothing I can do,
Nothing I can say,
Your always gonna,
be right to get
your way.
What can I do 
that I said to you

Would happen ,
When you didn’t 
listen a million 
times, and
today..

Ps. why couldn’t you just
hear me to listen?
~Deb

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Nice write ! there is a book out there which is a work shop between spouses, It is something like seven ways to hear my heart. You answer some questions about yourself and it reveals how you listen and what your most wanted need of communication is..like touch..or little heart felt notes..or helping around the house ,,,anyway I try to remember which one my spouse is and concentrate on those ways. Trick is getting spouses to work through the short book to help in communication.all the best! my humble take on your poem........Jim

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The fish of the sea

DEB!! How are you my friend? How is the last month of the year treating you? What fantastic work. I really enjoy when you publish. The Cosmos seems a bit quite right now... peace and smiles to you. TFOTS 

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Yiyan Han

Hope that person reads this. Best wishes.

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Deb

Thank you my friends you guys are great! 🤗🤗

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