Poem -
HEART OF ICE...
How many men ....
Can touch the soul of a woman?
How many men ....
Can break the ice surrounding her heart ?
Melt her flesh....with his words of love and wisdom
Take her heart on a journey of inner - love
To a higher plane of devotion
Ice-queen to supreme goddess
Frozen heart from time and pain
Frozen tears with lies
How many men....
Can enter her mind - set it free ?
Word - lust caressing her body
Food for her soul
How many can touch the being of her existence?
Without feeling her flesh
Love with the earth
Rise to the stars
Exceed all others in their quest ?
How many men ? .......can give pure love ?
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Comments
I think this piece speaks to me. Just a few men can do that, cause women are..... Thanks so much for sharing Tina. Much love <3
Thank you Fayeampah ! i'm glad you like this as you are one of the few who can do that .If it helps along your path a lot of women are like that ..its finding the right one .Bless you my friend ! keep your words as sweet as they are ..much love <3 Tina x
I oved the movie what women want with mel Gibson...a moron that got educated ..lol
men have to be macho so they cant see women as equal so they cant understand them as such despite women having no more psychoses than me......I think men should occasionally cross dress..lol
lovely poem
LOL! i'm loving your comment Evrod! def agree to touch their feminine side most men should cross-dress lol I never saw that movie but now i'm curious to see Gibson as a moron lol thanx Evrod
Tina x
Feelings are transformed into words, words read transform back into a feelings and those feelings found thier way to my heart.
Heart of ice touched me deep, I love that piece its so Beautiful words with such depth could only have been spoken by a
Longing heart.
The man your looking for does exsists, he may be difficult to find but there lies his worth.
Thank you David for a lovely comment . To touch the soul with words first before flesh takes a lot of doing lol .The man who can have patience and understanding is indeed out there . Thank you :) TINA x
WOW Tina,what an exquisite write,it pulled a cord in my heart.I enjoyed reading it..
How many can touch the being of her existence?
Without feeling her flesh...amazing line very deep..
Cheers
Piusha thank you , it was a deep write for me as to have self-containment until the right person comes along is a learning curve but with inner peace too .Thank you very much for a lovely comment Tina x