Poem -
Heart Shaped
A heart shaped
Casket caressed
Sanctified with
Sorrows blessed.
The many times
I've oft spoke
To the mahogany
Grains I stroke
There endures
Memory past,
Of a promise
Bound to last.
Until death
Do us part,
Engraved on a
Coppice heart.
Sometimes it's only
Grief that will hold,
A treasure more
Priceless than gold.
An ache that burns
Deeper than pain,
Where only the
Ashes remain.
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Beautiful and sad write!
Sometimes it's only
Grief that will hold,
A treasure more
Priceless than gold.
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
P.S. Congratulations on your Book!
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-Thank you, Poetess, for writing this very entertaining read, and sharing such a personal account of someone's feelings,Β in the topic. The conceptual theme was written many times, and very beautifully displayed in descriptive metaphors/simile such as "Sometimes it's only Grief that will hold, A treasure more Priceless than gold."-It seems like you shared a little piece of someone's life and did so well in such a prerogative of understanding,Β
-thanks for sharing this and take care and have a good one especially love those that love you dearly.
Alex
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Sorrow a strange sweet feel
stirs passion hidden deep
a heart shaped casket
touches everyone
sad sweet write
john
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"Sometimes it's only
Grief that will hold,
A treasure more
Priceless than gold."
Fantastic! wonderful sentiment,Β I loved thatΒ line, one of those that Β I've read and wished I'd written it !
Lovely poem.
John x
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