Heaven Sent
When the daffodils bloomed
I knew it was your smile,
that illuminated my once baron meadow
and set the flowers to sing
Spring became constant
A joyful event
Heaven sent from your radiant light
For every day is full of sun and wonderment
Since I felt your warmth,
your grace
This space, called me
Had been so achingly forlorn
Waiting for a new dawn
To seed new life
into these empty veins
To sooth away,
those deep rooted pains
You arrived
Drifting in like that morning mist
That seeks to rest,
to settle its tender kiss on delicate ground
And I knew then
I had found,
the source to my blue sky
You set my soul to fly
So high
I could see above my own trees
Where I saw myself through your eyes
Through the sunlight that was you
And I knew, at that moment
That you were
and always would be
The light in me
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Nothing like getting the desire of your heart.
love this Gwendoline.
Absolutely beautiful.
thanks for sharing.
Thank you my friend, you are so right in your thinking. So glad you liked this poem. Always such a pleasure to read your feedback x
wonderful poem
loved it
Thanks Greg, you are always so kind x
Rob many thanks for reading and liking this one. Hope you are well x
Im still putting thought into my comment , so stay tuned... super powerful piece so im re-reading couple times first :)
Wow Rob you are truly kind to give my poem such attentive reading. Many many thanks my friend x
So i greatly enjoyed the theme as you literally built the write from the ground up, I found it very uplifting as each stanza ended with a word rhyming with the begining of the next one ( not sure if on purpose but it really gave it more emphasis) and as always you have such a unique way to create such vision through your words . Beautiful poem ~Rob
Wow Rob your perception of this piece is perfect. I did indeed intend to grow this from the ground up. Because this person helped me see more of myself and helped me grow in spirit and belief. Yes I like to sometimes rhyme at the start rather than the end. Something I have done before. Many many thanks for this wonderful feedback. You are a true observer of life and it reflects in your poetry and commentary. Makes for a great writer Rob. Thanks for this today x
What does one say when standing in the face of beauteous love ....sent by the unknown that seemingly knows somehow!!......I LOVE this GWENDOLINE....but then again who wouldn't LOVE to receive this as a declaration!!......I hope he love's it as much as we all love it dear poet sister!!.....It's absolute perfection.....the love dripping from its lines......and the words creating a world sublime!!......PINNED for perfection!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Wow Tony, what a wonderful comment. Your words reflected a beautiful nature to this piece. I am thrilled you could see love in it. What better season to explain the birth of love, than spring itself. Fabulous and insightful reading my friend. You never ever disappoint any of us here on Cosmo with your input and creative mind
Many many thanks 🙏
Gwen x
this is quite simply exquisite ..
roll on Prolet as we say back in my little Bulgarian mountain village presently shivering under almost a foot of pristine freshly fallen snak x
Thanks my friend, I love spring. Love snow too. Well it looks pretty, especially when freshly fallen. Sounds a beautiful place to be. Many thanks for reading and the pin x
You are as always more than welcome moi edna priatelka ........................and yes, it surely is ................ x
Had to look that one up lol...full of talents you are Neville. Hope all is well in winter wonderland x
I can say it, but I'll be blowed, I never thought I could spell it correctly ............ x
What a wonderful piece! I loved reading and re reading this and the tender sentiment is so delicately intertwined throughout this piece that it just make the whole poem sing with joy and love..Beautiful Just beautiful! Lodigiana xx
Hello Lodigiana, so wonderful to have you visit my page. Many thanks for these beautiful words. Truly grateful to hear your feedback and to know you enjoyed it so much you read it twice 😊 Thanks so very much
Gwen x
You are gracious and generous with sharing your words, your grace.
In the light we shine and keep it anchored in this world.. The remaining stars
from long ago we are reborn into each others hearts. I see such beauty in
this. I can go to that still space where the unwavering love of our divine nature is always shining forth. IT is when we consciously turn from that blessed light we enter the darkness.. We always have the choice to return to our true home and nature... the light. well written and a lovely encounter.
sharaine
Sharaine
Many many thanks for leaving your beautiful words with this poem. Your light shines vibrantly here. All the best
Gwen x