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Heavenly Revelations: Locked Out of Paradise

Heavenly Revelations: Adam & Eve and their loss

Heavenly Revelations: Locked Out of Paradise

In the dawn of time, in realms divine,
Where light and love eternally shine,
From dust and breath, God’s hands did weave,
The forms of Adam and of Eve.

In Eden’s garden, lush and green,
A paradise like none had seen,
They walked in grace, with hearts so pure,
In joy and peace, their lives secure.

The fruits and flowers, bright and fair,
With fragrant scents that filled the air,
The rivers flowed with crystal gleam,
In Eden's light, like a dream.

God’s voice they heard, both day and night,
Guiding their steps in Eden’s light.
With innocence, they roamed the land,
Together held in love’s command.

Yet from the shadows, whispers came,
A serpent’s tongue that spoke of shame.
“Partake this fruit,” it softly said,
“And you shall be like God instead.”

Temptation’s grip did take its hold,
On hearts once pure, now becoming bold.
They took the fruit, both Eve and man,
And thus began the sorrowed plan.

Their eyes were opened, innocence lost,
A heavy price, a grievous cost.
In shame they hid from God’s own sight,
Cloaked in fear, from Eden’s light.

God’s voice then called, with saddened tone,
“Where have you gone, why do you roam?”
With heavy hearts, they stepped forth bare,
Their disobedience laid them bare.

From Eden’s gates, they were cast out,
With tears of sorrow and of doubt.
The cherubim with flaming sword,
Stood guard before the garden’s ward.

Yet hope remained, a distant dream,
In God’s great plan, a sacred scheme.
Though paradise was lost that day,
Redemption’s path was set in play.

Through toil and strife, they walked the earth,
To find in pain, a new rebirth.
For in their hearts, a seed was sown,
A yearning for the world once known.

So in heaven, the chaos began,
A crisis never forgotten.
Thus the tale begins anew,
A war between brothers, fierce and true.

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sparrowsong

Hello Maximilian...

​​​​​If there was a War going on in Heaven would the Angels stay there or come down to get away?

I think they're having a lot of fun here...

​​​​​​I'm sure we'll know when they go back the Coast is Clear...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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