Poem -
Hell
Broken I stand on shattered shins,
I fall to my knees bound by my sins.
Flesh is torn and muscles ripped,
Open wounds waned and whipped.
I burn without solace in hottest of flames,
Malefic entities pick my remains.
Gorged and consumed incessant through time,
I pay with pain and cries for my crimes.
I stand and stand again and again,
Amidst the screams and horrors of men,
Destroyed and scattered across human debris,
The face of my killer non-other than me!
My weep derides in callous of cackles,
I beg for my soul weighed down in shackles.
Regret of a past and mistakes Iβve made,
This hell in my head makes it hard to evade.
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The same words got to me the face of my killer non other than me. Wicked??
Thank you for your lovely comments.
outstanding write. I'm envious of your talents!
Thank you Lisa im honoured by your words.
Great write Sir SIMON!!.... for all the reasons stated in the comments above.... and for the extremely powerful use of phrasing ~
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β ~ "Malefic entities pick my remains..."
WOW!!... what an outstanding combination of words..... and there are MANY more within this masterfully crafted write that conveys the pain, suffering, and tormentΒ found in this poetic dramatization of the offerings found in "HELL"!!.....PINNED!!......smokin' grooves brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?β΄β€
Thank you Tony im overwhelmed with the support.
A phenomenal writeΒ Simon! love the imagery created here which allows the reader to empathise so easily with you vision..Thanks so much for sharing xx
Thank you so much for your kind words.