Eternal Darkness
Screams of pain detonating
Inferno blazing twirling
Sweeping on the dirty floor grating;
Boiling oil whirling swirling
Lungs scorching going under
Feeling his obscured thunder
Doddering in utmost pain,
People dying and going insane
Walking in the blazing depths
Fury of these crown of thorns:
Endeavouring with every skirmishing breath
Satan with cuspidated horns
All these abhorrent sinners;
Eating loathsome dinners
This hateful river of blood
Drowning deeper in the mud,
Contemporary eternal darkness
Red light blinding
Covering up the heartless;
Teeth of disoriented souls grinding
Dust of corroding flesh
Disorientated noxious effluvium
Making such a terrible mess,
Blood rivers carrying the decaying alluvium.
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Comments
Very descriptive look of dreaded hell. Well done.Β How long have you been writing for?Β
Well i'm a songwriter I've been song writing for a couple of years now. Thought I would try poetry even though they're the same thing. So I've been writing poems for 2 days, song writing for years.
I thoroughly enjoyed the read
Thank you so muchΒ
wow! that was really good. I loved your choice of words. well done!
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it
I too am a songwriter!!....... the greatest song writers of ALL time are poets at heart....... excluding the Classical & JazzΒ genres of course!!!.......ALL STARS!!.... well done JAMIE!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?β΄β€
Thank you I'm also In a band called The Antheads
Enjoyed reading this. Love your choice of words
Thank you so much