Whoโs laughing now
The words that you say to meย
They cut real deepย
Dealing with depressionย
I just donโt wanna sleepย
Suicide turns into my only obsessionย
I hate that Iโm to scared to tell them all these confessions.
Youโve made me not wanna live this life no more
I swear Iโve had enough
You punch, kick and throw me to the floor
You know my life is tough
This is how you make me feel
Making me want to overdose on pills.ย
I just wanna walk up to you and show you the scars on my wrists
Youโre the one that caused them
Your words Iโm trying to resist
I ask myself how do I persist
Iโm always running from my problemsย
Itโs never gonna solve them.ย
Youโve made me not wanna live this life no more
I swear Iโve had enough
You punch, kick and throw me to the floor
You know my life is tough
This is how you make me feel
Making me want to overdose on pills.ย
Iโm taking life one step at a time
Why are you treating it like thatโs such a crime
They give me too many happy pills
How the hell are they supposed to heal
Feel like Iโm alone, ainโt nobody there for meย
The thought of dying by myself is always fucking scaring me.ย
Youโve made me not wanna live this life no more
I swear Iโve had enough
You punch, kick and throw me to the floor
You know my life is tough
This is how you make me feel
Making me want to overdose on pills.
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Comments
Bullying is not acceptable to me in any shape or form! I would dare say I enjoyed this write that's packed with emotion and pain.
Thank you. Itโs a song I wrote about bullying as I experience it so yeah Iโm glad you liked it :)
I've been in dark places before and they are not nice if you ever need somebody to vent to just message me I'll be here to talkย
Aww thank you it means a lot
This is a great piece, a lot of depth and raw emotion, it reminded me of a poem I wrote called 'The wolves' you should check it out! I liked the repetition in your piece, I do that wuite often for effect ???
Yeah that was a song I wrote about bullying but Iโm glad you liked it :)
I was cruelly bullied at school....because of my abuse as a child, I taught my children to be kind. well written pen. Though the content was sad and disheartening you did a good job writing it
Thank you. Glad you liked it :)
Wow Jamie, pretty powerful stuff! An excellent write! xx
Thank you it means a lotย
This is a bad place to be.ย Sometimes being abused is so hard to get out of.ย Great writing.ย Deserves nomination.ย I'm always around if you need to talk.ย Terry Kay
Thank you so much it means a lotย
Jamie, you are very welcome. Love to you.ย Terry Kay
Can you do me a favour please
Jamie I will certainly try.ย Terry Kay
Can you subscribe to my bands YouTube channel pleaseย
I would feel honored. How do I find you? Is it under your name?ย Terry Kay
No just search on YouTube โFalse Blood bandโ and it should come upย
Jamie, .I found you. There's a Jamie Saari Crawford too. Keep up the good work.ย Looking forward to following you on your journey.ย Hug to you. Terry Kay
Thankyou so much it means a lot
Have you subscribed
Jamie I think I did! Let me know if you don't see it.ย Left a message too!ย Got to go out for a bit. I will check when I get back home too...Terry Kay
Jamie, want to check...is that you..I will understand... You're a lion next to me...is this you?
No. Just type in on YouTube False Blood band and then it Gould come up
Congrats on your phenomenalย win
wait what win
You should be getting a message from cosmofunnel lol look at the top of your poem page
congratulations.
Thank you :)
Congrats Jamie, Lovely piece.
Thank you so muchย
I've mainly helped people that went through that next time they do that too you just ignore it you are strongย
Thank you so much it means a lot :)
It's what i was taught
What do you mean