Poem -
" HER DISORDER "
A sweet disorder in her dress
A care-free curl, dangling, from her head
Ribbons flow, poetically
From her,
Disorder..
Oracles, must still ascend
For permission from her smile,
And what her suitors now contend
Is a, queenly distraction
Ordained,
From her disorder...
Dare we break, the proper order
For the sweet allure
Oozing, from her distraction
Or do we, alas
Cross Love's likely border
And learn, to swim
In her disorder...
No princely pomp, or well-intended kiss
Can conceive of the sweet retreat,
Found deeply inside
The curve, of her back
Where soldiers, proud, have lost themselves
In the ungodly attraction,
Of her sweet,
Disorder...
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Comments
Superb poem Tony,
pure class & style noted in your fine ink;
publish for evermore.
The theme of her dysfunction is
wonderful and her suitors
shall wither or benefit;
really good write here!!
Luv from Jai :)
Hey Thanx JAI MASTERS!!............ awesome comment my friend........REALLY appreciate it..........thanx for pushing me toward the publishing thing......... you're the best!!........... smiles.............T xo
Hi Tony.. Such a beautiful poem touched my heart.
As if she is afflicted but has attributes to be loved
That is only my interpretation as i read it though :-)
really enjoyed pinned love Debs xo
You're RIGHT DEBS!!...... it is in her flaws where her sweet disorder shines.......WHATEVER that disorder may be........ well done.........I hoped someone find the heart of this..............thanx so much........ high fives...........T xo
Hi Tony,
As the singer Brian Poindexter said, "Hot!, Hot!, Hot!". If I would have ever met a woman like that, with such alluring disorders, I'm sure I would have been arrested for "disorderly conduct". Your poetry always leaves me wondering if I've interpreted it correctly. That's the pure beauty of it; the reader is able to form their own hypotheses, and come to their own conclusion. Great write, my dear friend!!
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry
Hey thanx LARRY!!........ yep!.... you got it!!...... the disorder being the allure was the basic intent of this write........... and I DO agree with you about leaving it open to interpretation to an extent.........I mean I always have some sort of intent or message to convey............ but that's one of my favorite things about poetry.......... it's such an uncorrupted art form...........thanx for this bro!!............ Love and Rockets!!........T xo