His Beauty
There is beauty to be held in his smile
One that makes those dark pools shine like onyx jewles
They bring to the surface-
That ever increasing emotion of insurmountable devotion
Springing into action an unwavering attraction
Yes, there is a warmth found in his charms
Where his virility shines
Enraptures the heart with its tender loving vines
Binding a lovers gaze
To crave
Savour
His astute, valiant nature
For he is sunshine on a weary day
Denouncing all the bleak
Dispersing the grey
He is the petals to a perfect rose
The arabesque to my ballet
Oh how he shines above the defening crowds
Like an ornate beacon
A star on the ground
He holds his own vigour and grace
The catalyst to my light
That was once an empty space
By Gwendoline.
October 2021
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wonderful poem
Thank you Greg and thanks for the pin x
Such a stunningly beautiful write Gwen..perfection in fact. This work.has captured all the beauty and wonderment of falling in love but more than that...it reads like a sigh of relief...there is a purity and peace to this work...i love it...I truly do 💖
Marion, thank you so very much my friend. Your words just made my day 🙂❤ xx
Beautifully done, great metaphors
really enjoyed this
Lorna
Hi Lorna, thanks so much for your wonderful feedback. Really pleased you liked my metaphors 🙂 x
Awww love this one Gwen. Fantastic writing my friend.
Hi Max, thank you my friend I am chuffed you liked this one. I do hope life is treating you well, will stop by your page today 🙂 x
Wow!! G-Money!!,,,sounds like you have stumbled into something/someone inspiring here.....the words are delicate and inspired......a plethora of You & He equations that seem to add up to a beautiful pairing of souls....the phrasing is so lovely.....so loving......truly a pleasure to read dear lady.....
~ "The catalyst to my light..."
Wow!! just beautiful!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......you go girl!! "Work it!! Own it!! Work it!! Own it!!".....smiles.....well penned dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Hello Tony :) Yes it would appear I have indeed found someone truly special. It is a big world out there, so I feel lucky to of stumbled upon them.
Love your reference to "Pretty Woman" Thanks for your wonderful supportive words my friend. May luck be with you
Gwen x
It would be an absolute crime not to vote n pin these amazingly beautiful words of yours Gwen .. & since I am a law abiding fella, I just did what my conscience bade me do ....................... :)
They are indeed quite simply exquisite ma'am ... & truly tooly too ......... Neville x
Awe Neville...you are too kind my friend :) thank you for leaving such wonderful feedback. I am always so grateful when you stop by
Gwen x
Always a pleasure Gwen .. you've never let me down yet my friend :) x
Gwen! I hope this person is real in your life because they seem perfect in your words — and you deserve perfect. And if he IS real? May he never let you down.
Lovely words, Gwen, and delightful to read xx
Awe thank you my friend. Yes we hope love can bring good to our lives. Thank you for the wishes ❤ x