His Charismatic Lands
Reaching through this open space
Where traces of your intrinsic light
catch my gaze
I brave to sink my listless mind
Deep into the depths of your solitary thoughts
There...I allow myself to be caught
Washed up on the warm sands
of your charismatic lands
Drenched in sun-kissed blissfulness
I am free to be lost inside the confines
of your fervent illumination
Euphoric manifestations
conjure an effervescent jewelled sky
Whose vivacious sparks
gleam infinite streams
of wishful dreams
They echo in the minds eye
Reflecting in two broken souls
A fruitful correlation
of transcendental propagation
Like a moth to the flame
All senses strive to dive
ever deeper into your radient light
To ignite within the heart
of every star
anchored to shine
in your sky
The perpetual intuitive charms
of salvations loving arms
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Comments
awesome ink
So grateful Poetessdarkly, thanks for stopping by and leaving your kind words x 🌻
WOW WOW WOW
what poem i read 3
times its awsome
a masterpice
but way above
a masterpice
Wowsers Greg what a most wonderful reaction. Your comment leaves me beaming my friend 😊 thank you a thousand times for reading this three times and leaving such kind words. They truly make a poets day 💛 x
This is a MAGNIFICENT write GWEN!!....there are so many excellent lines/phrases to be recognized here....I mean, truly stunning phrasing like ~
~ "I brave to sink my listless mind
deep into the depths of your solitary thoughts..."
Wow!!...the implications of that phrase alone would take a few pages to completely convey.....I am at a loss....for I have never received ANYTHING so beautifully crafted just for me.....which in and of itself says so much.....Thank you is not enough...I only wish I could be there to hold your hand.....look you in the eye......and convey to you with my soul...... how much this piece means to me.....seriously love.....this took a LOT of consideration to make manifest.....and It is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!.....thank you G!...now I will take a break so I can faint!! (smiles)......PINNED!! (of course)...I will print this one out!!.......you are the air!!.......T xo : )
So very happy T to find such a loving response to my poem for you. I wrote this weeks ago, and just kept looking at it wondering “should I ?” So glad I did, for your reaction is worth the rosy cheeks I now have on my silly face 😊 of course this is all yours love, each and every word is for you 💗 xx
Stunning write Gwen...you have managed to describe ...love!!! 🤩...in my opinion this work oozes love and a connection that is born of that very special connection of souls meant to be together. Beautiful work.xx
Thank you my lovely friend, for seeing the warmth and beautiful intentions in this here scribble of mine. Your words capture my intent perfectly 💗x
Wow Gwen. I read this twice! Then I read the comments!! Omg what a piece and every comment agrees!!
its bloodly Magnificent! Magical! Electric!
Some of the lines....are amazing! Deep and written elegantly!
truly fantastic love piece...I've had to pin!
beautiful beautiful write Gwen. You are incredible with a pen and I'm such a fan! Px
Gosh P finding these words from you this morning, make me beam 😊❤️ Thank you my lovely friend for leaving such stunning and encouraging feedback. I am blown away at the reception of this piece. You all bring to the surface of me, the biggest smile. I am forever grateful to have you lovely people in my life, where we can share each other’s joy for poetry. Can’t wait to read more from you dear P 🙏💕xx all the best
your happy to know you
Gwen xx🌸
to echo the comments above, awesome! and I am a forever fan!...............Jim
Awe Jim you just make my day with your kindness and lovely friendship. May your light forever shine for all to see the beauty that is you Jim. You’re such a good human. Thank you for leaving me such encouraging and caring words
Your good friend Gwen 💛x
Whoever he is, he's a very lucky fella .. Love poems like this dont come along that often .. and I wonder how many others there are out there, like yours truly, who wonder and wish, might the next one, be for me .. Darn near perfect ma'am, that's what it is ........................................ Neville x
Yay thanks my friend…T thankfully loved it too phew. I can’t see you being left on any shelf Neville. You are too good a soul for that. Thanks for liking his poem 😊 x
Always a pleasure Gwen & always mine :)
This piece is a keeper of a poem you have scribed Gwen.
So lovingly thought up and presented, one from Cupid's heart not arrow.
A poem of light and joy, one to certainly reread and become once again captivated by.
Wow Gwen! Sheer class through-out and not a beat or heartbeat missed.
Great love expressed so beautifully and beguiling.
Shaun. x.
Gosh Shaun, you have ensured I smile tonight, thank you so very much for being so thoughtful and spending time on my page. Your words lift my spirit and fill me with encouragement. Which is much needed of late. Thank you my friend for your light and constant warmth. You truly have a heart of gold
Your very grateful friend
Gwen x
Without a doubt one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a very, very long time.
Shivers…
Great work ❤️
I can't believe I missed this one! On the face of it this is one beautiful, beautiful poem BUT dig a little deeper and you find a glorious depth to it. It depicts falling in love all right but the wonderful lines suggest that there is a bit more to it than that. When I read this I see a person not actually looking for love but finds it anyway. A love that is suddenly all embracing and very much cherished.
I'm happy for you Gwen xx
Wow thanks so much Tina, it is always an absolute treat to find your words against any poem on this site. For you are always so generous with your feedback. Thank you for reading deeply into this one, and finding the heart of its intent. So grateful :)
Gwen xx❤️
❤ xx