Poem -
His Sustenance
His sustenanceย
Held in soft spoken wordsย
Peruse this mottled mindย
To teach those languished shadows to shineย
His gazeย
His sumptuous raysย
That leave their tiny flecksย
To rest upon this mortal chestย
and coax loves light to manifestย
A once withered soulย
Blessed from his glanceย
That iridescent incessant joyย ย
From his sustenanceย
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Comments
wow what a great poemย
Thank you so much my friend xย
Tiny flickers of hope whisper from these words Gwen. A daring to hope for salvation. Again, another beautiful and soulful write from your talented pen my friend ๐
Thank you lovely ๐
Wow!! GWEN!!....and I would even add to the above that the flicker of hopeย may also be referred to as a light in the love itself......I really like the way this is formatted as a typical A.B,A,B, kind of rhyme scheme but is actually a freestyle/prose delivery with an amazing poetic rhythm to it that allows to be read as Verse!! It's brilliant and could only be pulled off by the gifted hand of GWENDOLINE!!....seems to me there is something magical working in your life!!......congrats dear poet sister!!......PINNED!!....VERY well penned my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoย : )
Blimey Tony, I donโt think commentary can get any better than the words you left me here. Wow I feel so grateful to read such feedback. Thank you for believing in my writing and always encouraging me with you relentless wonderful support. You are such an amazing friend and poet.
Thank you for this todayย
Your friendย
Gwen x
Lorris many thanks for reading and liking this poem ๐x
brilliant ink Gwen
Yay thank you for checking back on this one. So glad you enjoyed :) x