Poem -
His Sustenance
His sustenance
Held in soft spoken words
Peruse this mottled mind
To teach those languished shadows to shine
His gaze
His sumptuous rays
That leave their tiny flecks
To rest upon this mortal chest
and coax loves light to manifest
A once withered soul
Blessed from his glance
That iridescent incessant joy
From his sustenance
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wow what a great poem
Thank you so much my friend x
Tiny flickers of hope whisper from these words Gwen. A daring to hope for salvation. Again, another beautiful and soulful write from your talented pen my friend 💖
Thank you lovely 💗
Wow!! GWEN!!....and I would even add to the above that the flicker of hope may also be referred to as a light in the love itself......I really like the way this is formatted as a typical A.B,A,B, kind of rhyme scheme but is actually a freestyle/prose delivery with an amazing poetic rhythm to it that allows to be read as Verse!! It's brilliant and could only be pulled off by the gifted hand of GWENDOLINE!!....seems to me there is something magical working in your life!!......congrats dear poet sister!!......PINNED!!....VERY well penned my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Blimey Tony, I don’t think commentary can get any better than the words you left me here. Wow I feel so grateful to read such feedback. Thank you for believing in my writing and always encouraging me with you relentless wonderful support. You are such an amazing friend and poet.
Thank you for this today
Your friend
Gwen x
Lorris many thanks for reading and liking this poem 🙃x
brilliant ink Gwen
Yay thank you for checking back on this one. So glad you enjoyed :) x