Poem -

Holding Back the Smile

author
Neville

As slow as the night took hold
of them both ..
She proceeded to remove each
of the gold rings
and to discard her robes for him
as was instructed ..
However, she refused to offer
a hint of a smile,
or to relinquish the slave band ..

Ā 

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Tags: 
Abuse Choice Decision Rights Slave
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
Topic: 
Reality
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Wilford Barker

This one took me on a wild trip Neville.
I see the desire.. I feel the pressure.. The submission.. And reluctance to fully engage.
Power pack.
Thank you for the trip.

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author
Neville

Thanks for making the effort worthwhile .. NevilleĀ 

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Jac Fables

A Woman for Each Season. A Great Story of Love & Passion.Ā 

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author
Neville

Thanks for swinging by and considering these words Jacques .. N :)

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