Poem -
Holes
Got holes in my heartΒ
And they ain't of a dartΒ
But of grief, disappointmentsΒ
And poisonΒ
Got holes in my brain
For no thought is for gain
But of weakness, regretsΒ
And losses
Got holes in my heartΒ
They've been placed by facts
And this day dead will be some emotions
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Hey CLEO!!..... I've tried to comment on this three times now..... it keeps disappearing, hope this one sticks.......I don't often read this kind of write from you so I'm hoping this is a fiction..... but somehow I know it's not..... the words and subsequent phrases are too passionate ......powerful disappointment and heartache running throughout..... some VERY original phrasing too. Like ~ " Got holes in my heart!"...... make a great song actually!!...... powerful stuff girlfriend!!.....I pray this situation resolves itself well!!...... and I hope that writing this helped you a little!!......ALL STARS!!.....hugs-n-kisses!!......your friend and admirer......T xo ?ββ΄β³
Hi Tony, Β thanks so much. Truly appreciate your kind words. Warm regards.
Hi Cleo, Β a great metaphor!! Β well done! Β
xoxoΒ
LeahΒ
Hi Leah, thanks so much.
wow I noticed someone only gave you one star.... you are so talented, it breaks my heart when others don't give you what you deserve which is 5. Awesome ink wonderful read
Hi Lisa, IΒ truly appreciate your love and support. Thanks a lot. Warm regards.