Poem -
Homeless
I pass u nearly everyday
I rarely look your way
I wonder what your name is
And what you have to say
You make yourself invisible
Sat there all alone
I imagine where you come from
And where you once called home
I think of those who miss you
And ponder what they'd say
If they were soon to find you
I hope it comes that day
Your coat , it is all dirty
Your jeans and shirt a mess
And even through the muck and grime
You smile your very best
So I'll look your way this morning
And listen to what you say
It may just ease my conscience
As a pound I throw your way
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Comments
A lovely sentiment sweet poetess!!....... well delivered with a strong sense of rhythm and timing.......... well formatted....... and most importantly....... the observant eye of the poet shining light on what so many find invisible.........ALL STARS!!........ well done....... and WELCOME to COSMO!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?☀✴
Hey .. I already am a member but can't log onto my original account, trying to sort it out, I have written quite a lot whilst trying to log in... so there may be a few published at same time
thanks for the kind words about my writing
Hello Tony
Sorry to bother you
Could you tell me who I talk to about admin... one of my poems are on twice, also I have two accounts one I can't seem to access, anyway if you could put me in touch with whoever deals with this sort of thing?
Thanks in advance
Julie
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful Poem, Julie! I love the compassion you have with this poem! This is the second Homeless type story I have read; and yes your poetry is like a story to me! I really love the work you have done with this poem and I gave you five stars because you deserve it ok.
Many Blessings, Sharmelle
thankyou I truly appreciate the sentiment, thankyou for your kind words and praise
Kindest Regards
Julie
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You are more than welcome, Julie!
Many Blessings, Sharmelle
Julie,
Very much enjoyed and (if) only or what (if) we all, could feel the (way), of your spoken poem? Sure there would be a lot more kind deeds, annotated and sharingly told, rather misunderstandings by all involved parties, leading to an air of (segregated) socialization and confusion......Like the (subject), chosen to write on behalf of, in this poem....Jim
Lovely rhyme and sentiment,well done.
John
Very nice peace!it reached my heart.thank you.
I mean piece.
Thankyou for your appreciated comments... good to know that what I write actually gets viewed ? Julie
Congratulations ?!!
Thankyou Leah... I'm chuffed to bits ??❤️
Julie, a really excellent poem from start to finish, it is riveting, congratulations on your win!
HI Julie congratulations
Great poem
Best wishes Debs
Congratulations Julie on your win,a lovely peice well written. I was honoured to have won in march- so now hand the literary flame to you.
I hope the win gives you confidence to write from your soul, Godspeed.
John
Hello Julie...
Great write!
Great message!
I read this a couple of times and may it be shared across the globe...
Congratulations!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thankyou Sparrowsong for your kind words.
Appreciate you taking the time to read my poem
Julie x
Returning hugs
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