First and foremost, not a life for any, to have to endure.. Subjected to (the cruel torture of another), as a child, teen or adult .... How can any feel, after going through the door of the world, inwhich you sadly but with (emphasis), explained in this highly explosive write. A delivery very well meant, to stoke the emotions, of all its readers and bring attention to (abuse in all forms), that abusers tend to think is o.k. to practice, when they feel they have the security, of being behind (domestic), closed doors."When the tongue speaks the full truth, of which the mouth (for so long) had to hold but now, it (refuses) to be (forced), to silently comply......I like the question/answer format, inwhich you've posted this poem......
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WOW Daisy,
First and foremost, not a life for any, to have to endure.. Subjected to (the cruel torture of another), as a child, teen or adult .... How can any feel, after going through the door of the world, inwhich you sadly but with (emphasis), explained in this highly explosive write. A delivery very well meant, to stoke the emotions, of all its readers and bring attention to (abuse in all forms), that abusers tend to think is o.k. to practice, when they feel they have the security, of being behind (domestic), closed doors."When the tongue speaks the full truth, of which the mouth (for so long) had to hold but now, it (refuses) to be (forced), to silently comply......I like the question/answer format, inwhich you've posted this poem......
Take Care,Jim
Thankyou so much for your take on my poem! It's interesting for me to hear how different people interprete it :)
You are more then welcome Daisy......Jim