~ HUMBLED MAN ~
I sit in ambled streets that meet
In corners of my room
A place where naked, I can think
And roam alone, in this the womb,
Of fluid concentration
That comforted place where intention greets
The loneliness of being alone
A brick wall of constant, bloody, defeat
Where each day's a fight into the bone
Of self-inflicted persecution
I am a man of no value of late
(quotes my silent partner)
Becoming a banner of some debate
A black smoke of brutal darkness
A requiem, with no resolution
That veil draped and glorified
Holds no sway in my swimming
For surely the magic in having died
Is that the other side, is living
And sings an opus, with shiny conclusion.....
Tony Taylor
feels good to post again : )
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Hello Tony...
It's so great to see your write again...
YAY!
Hope your doing well my friend...
Awesome write as always...
Commenting on you for years...
I think I'm running out of things to say...
Welcome Back!
Best wishes and blessings...
Love n Rockets
Feathers
You're truly cool!!.......thanx so much for taking the time and for caring
between the lines.......stay groovy my friend!!......Keep ruffling those FEATHERS!!.......Peace.....T xo
He’s
Back
Bid huge SMILES!!.......T xo
Love and rockets
Hi Tony,
Wow! What an epic poem. Great to see you back. This write was very much worth the wait. It's hard for me to pick my favourite parts, but the first and second verse really speak to me. A very well crafted piece. Pinned for perfection 📌 as you would often say.
Hope you are keeping well. - Syd xo
Thanx brother!!........as always I am most
pleased that you took the time!!....Your
opinion matters very much to me!!.....love
that you're still here.....lots of respect!!
Stay Groovy
dear poet brother
Hi Tony,
so so glad you posted!!.. fantastic piece, you can tell it's from the deepest depths....
"the loneliness of being alone" this speaks volumes.
I do hope you are good and well
and I hope you are going to be on here often, it's so nice to see your words, you have been a very big miss
lots of love
Lorna xx
I am ever your friend dear Miss Lorna and
for your kindness I will find a way to repay
your kindness with friendship's finest aspects!!
Thanx for taking time with this and delivering your
insights!........smiles!......T xo
Ahh thank you Tony...
my friendship is free, you have nothing to repay
Sending good thoughts your way
Love
Lorna xx
Welcome back Tony. Missed your sophisticated writes.
JP
hey Tony! missed you big time! cool write my friend!.................................Jim
And!!! You do not dissapoint!! Your words resonate so deeply Tony, you'll never know. Beautifully and deeply written from ...angst...hopefully conquered...or at least abated for a while, you really do have a knack of wringing out the deepest thoughts and moulding them into stunning poetry. Look forward to your next!! X