Poem - 14 April 2018, 15:13

I AM DEATH

I am Death and I come for you I am here everyday all day long,
There is no song for you I will wait for you and when the day comes
I will be there, I don't care how much it will hurt your family or your
friends your soul will be mine I will find you where ever you are
Because I am death and I am death no matter where yo are I
will come and get you the raven and crow will fly past your grave
and priest will say his sermon bless this person for death
has become the, I am death you can run away or hide but
I will find you because I am death

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Death

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Drama

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The Soul

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Tony Taylor14 April 2018, 15:39

Sir GREG!!....a fine example of that which the ' human condition' seems to have concerned itself with for many centuries now....... you have brought this subject matter to life here....... although the 'he he ha ha' didn't work for me...... the rest of your write rang true dear poet brother!!......I am but a humble poet.... and I am VERY happy that this write crossed my path my friend......ALL STARS!!.... well done!!....LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo

Greg Etsell14 April 2018, 15:42

thank you Tony I will take off he he ha ha

lodigiana16 April 2018, 02:22

Hi Greg, a sombre but such a deep poem...talking about the inner fear we all associate with that great leveller in life..death! Really well written and a joy to read!
Lodigiana x

Greg Etsell16 April 2018, 04:03

Thank you Lodigiana yes death is part life it happens every day I have lost 2 friends in the last 3 mouth suddenly it was shock i will miss tham very much thay were a big part of my life but life goes

lodigiana16 April 2018, 04:19

So sorry for your loss Greg xx

Richard Waters16 April 2018, 04:42

Powerful.
Warm wishes.

Greg Etsell17 April 2018, 04:25

thank you Richard

Leah Yodico17 April 2018, 12:44

Hi Greg, death is inevitable. ..
powerful write ..

Greg Etsell17 April 2018, 12:45

Thank you Leah

Shaun Cronick12 February 2022, 12:10

Well done a beautifully and darkly forlornly put and in poetic spades too.
For when the Reaper comes a'calling there is nowhere to hide and no real wriggle room, or deal with him.
A powerful no punches pulled and be aware write as well.
Thank you Greg and chose to dig up (no pun intended) one of your older posted poems and was more than well rewarded with this dark gemstone.
Superb!