Poem -
I am
I am a daughter
I am a sister
I am a wife
I am a mother
I am a friend
I am vulnerable
I am strong
I am sensitive
I am tough
I am unique
I am real
I am life
I am atoms
I am energy
I am infinite
I am FOREVER.....
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Comments
Very good.
Terry.
Thank you x
Simple yet powerfully worded. Well done x
Thank you. The beginning came to me in my thoughts so had to get pen and paper and write it down and finish it!!Β
I REALLY like this.....In studying Physics we learn that EVERYTHING is ENERGY...β¦.makes this poem extremely profound to my mind!!β¦...ALL STARS!!β¦...well done PRATIBHA!!β¦β¦.LOVE & ROCKETS!!β¦β¦.T xo : )
Thank you very much Tony! Really appreciate your comments. We are all energy!!
I seem to like to include science and spirituality elements in my writing!!
BTW I like your "love and rockets" sign off!!Β
Really good ??
Thank you swati x
wonderful write I so enjoy your craft!
Thank you poetess. I am new at getting comments because I have never put my writing out there....until now and I have been writing for a long time on and off. So it's really nice to know.Β
Pratibha, beautiful dynamic and original. Powerful words!
Thank you very much. Glad you like it :)
Hi PS
Very well put, simple yet strong. My kind of work!
JP
Thank you John. Me too I love the simplicity in writing a piece if I can do it!!
My Dear Pratibha,
"I am" mesmerized by the powerful content of your words.Β Β
You will see that I do a majority of my comments poetically.Β I will do a Haiku in this response.
I am called me
Embodiment of my Soul
Powerful life force
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you kindly Larry. I have been pleasantly surprised by some of the comments as I have never put my writing out there until now!
I have only recently heard of Haiku so dont know much about it! I like the philosophy about it though. May need to look into more!!
Thank you for the spiritual comment! ?
My Dear Pratibha,
A Haiku, of course coming from ancient Japanese tradition, is based on simplicity.Β In seventeen syllables, three lines of five, seven, then again five, one must strive to portray their emotions.Β For many years now, I have been a purveyor of these most ancient forms of verse.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Excellent format, I enjoyed reading this a lot. Good work!Β
Thanks for commenting on my poetry as well. I clicked "follow" so I wouldn't miss your poetry in the future. Well, once I catch up! I am like 103 poems behind. All the best -- I'm becoming a fan!Β
Aaww thank you Katrina. Glad you liked it. I only discovered cosmo this month been on it for 3 weeks now! Feels like I been on here longer lol.
What a Powerful write Pratibha..
Such confidence expressed here.
I love it..
Thanks for the opportunity my friend.
Thank you kindly most appreciative. ?
Love this Pratibha, it is a lovely write full of....soul, yes that is the word, excellent ?
Thank you Marion. I wrote it about 3 years ago when it popped in my head and just wrote it. I love it when that happens. Doesn't happen often though!! So glad you read this as it crossovers in style to your one a little. Px ?
Beautifully expressed. Salute to womanhood :)
Thank you kindly Neetha. It's most appreciative. Glad you like it ? Px