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I AM A GHOST IN LOVE

I AM A GHOST IN LOVE

I live in this castle I died 500 years ago I am the ghost that lives here I don't know if some one killed me or I fell down the stairs, Any ways I walk the halls and go through the walls I am not a brave ghost I get scared of my own shadow and will hid when any one comes by. No one as lived here for a long time THEN! the other day some bout it out, A beautiful lady, A blonde blue eyes skinny wow I must go and hide for I am a ghost and I must haunt this place but how do that I am scared of my own shadow, I see her agin follow her I think am in love my heart begins to beat my body begain shake, She cant see me but that is going to change!! I bring flowers from out side and put tham on her bed and walk by her and whisper in her ear, I play lovely music so she know it me. I am a ghost in love my heart beat louder I feel a live  but I am not I open doors and windows to let her know its me, one night lot people came to the castle as thay sat around the table I felt this force pulling me in and then I was in some ones body thay ask me who are you what are you doing here so I told tham I also told tham I was a ghost in love with the lady thay laugh, then i heard some words I didnt understand  and then I begain to feel strange and I saw this white light and I started to go to it, Now I get to the end and I see the gates and a wait my fate I know I am not to late the lord lets me in after 500 years and now I am at peace,I am a ghost in love,

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

This reads as a Ghost who has taken possession...

Strange how one wouldn't remember how they died...

To see the light in that state of being someone said a prayer...

A cleansing that takes place because the new owners no longer want to share their space with someone they can't see, but they can feel...

Perhaps, they were concerned of your power to follow where they go...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Greg Etsell

thank you Sarrowsong it didn't come out the way I want to to I changed the name of the poem from the ghost in love to I am a ghost in love I though it would sound better but only if I  could write like Jason brown boy what poem that would be oh well thanks for reading

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Cherie yes he is peaceful ghost thank you fro reading

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Lorna

Hi Greg, the Ideas around this story are phenomenal...well done

I'm glad I took the time to read it

Lorna 

xx

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Jason Brown

This is a beautiful, sad and intriguing story.

It's so very moving.

J ;)

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Greg Etsell

Thank you so much Jason for reading my poem what honor!! it is for you to read my poem your great writer thank you so much.This poem I changed the name of the poem from the THE GHOST IN LOVE TO I AM GHOST IN LOVE I thought I would add me as the ghost and then fall in love with some one I think it worked out well, Jason thank you so much fro reading it means a lot to me peace and love to you  

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Greg lovely poem the imagery is lovely of  the 
ghost who falls in love with  a girl who he cant be with 
because he is not of her world
Enjoyed  this very much 
Love n hugs Debs xo 

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Rose Sho

Jason Poem made me read this...I'm glad I did...Well done Greg

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Rose when Jason read mine and said what he said I was so honored and when he wrote his that was inspired by my poem I was even more honored so that didn't sleep that night but I read it when I was about to go to bed,thanks so much for reading xxoo 

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