I am the Burial

I am the son
Of my own perception of my father and mother
I am my own slave and master
And I sell myself away in life
In the hope of bettering something
Non-existent to begin with
Here is the chasm of all that I am not
The inverse of which is all I could be
And I differ in slight degrees
For I have a sense of sight
Raised high above the prisons of earth and sea
Flesh and blood and bone
My one directive is to conquer the war of life
To pass through it and become my true self
I am my shadow's shadow in this half-light
And I am both man and divine creator
Yet the man I am sings a eulogy for the divine creator I was
And the god supplants the man
I have never
Been so ready
To leave.
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wow very relatable
Thank you for the kind comment, Octavia. I'm sorry, though, that you can relate to this rather depressive piece. Sending you positive vibes from my side!
aww its ok i wrote some myself and you too
Wow Jaime!!.........this is deeply introspective my friend.........and profound in your delivery of that place, though somewhat depressing, can be seen as promoting growth of understanding the self.........that place where growth is born in the soul...........I love the conflict here...........hope I didn't misinterpret your write.......had to read it twice.........a pleasure & a most challenging read........love and rockets!!........T xo
Many thanks, Tony, the kind words mean a great deal to me, as always. :) And I don't believe there to ever be such a thing such as misinterpretation in poetry. The best way to interpret any kind of art is through your own psyche and perspective as the reader, but then again, I'm sure you already know this. Hehe thank you so much for the support, dude. Stay rad. :)