Poem -

I am the Burial

I am the son

Of my own perception of my father and mother

I am my own slave and master

And I sell myself away in life

In the hope of bettering something

Non-existent to begin with

Here is the chasm of all that I am not

The inverse of which is all I could be

And I differ in slight degrees

For I have a sense of sight

Raised high above the prisons of earth and sea

Flesh and blood and bone

My one directive is to conquer the war of life

To pass through it and become my true self

I am my shadow's shadow in this half-light

And I am both man and divine creator

Yet the man I am sings a eulogy for the divine creator I was

And the god supplants the man

I have never

Been so ready

To leave.

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Jaime Ribeiro

Thank you for the kind comment, Octavia. I'm sorry, though, that you can relate to this rather depressive piece. Sending you positive vibes from my side!

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Tony Taylor

Wow Jaime!!.........this is deeply introspective my friend.........and profound in your delivery of that place, though somewhat depressing, can be seen as promoting growth of understanding the self.........that place where growth is born in the soul...........I love the conflict here...........hope I didn't misinterpret your write.......had to read it twice.........a pleasure & a most challenging read........love and rockets!!........T xo

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Jaime Ribeiro

Many thanks, Tony, the kind words mean a great deal to me, as always. :) And I don't believe there to ever be such a thing such as misinterpretation in poetry. The best way to interpret any kind of art is through your own psyche and perspective as the reader, but then again, I'm sure you already know this. Hehe thank you so much for the support, dude. Stay rad. :)

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