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I Am Not Perfect

I Am Not Perfect

I am not perfect

This i can admit

I have made many mistakes

Some ill never forget

I am not perfect

I have many flaws

But even when I'm docked down

I  will pick myself right back up and stand tall

I am not perfect

But what human being is?

 We all make mistakes

And grow as we live

We are not perfect

That what being human means..

For us to be BEAUTIFULLY imperfect beings

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Sayed Thangal

the true and right thinking of an individual, if it so there would not have any problem at any place,

well done Asmaa

sayed

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Mohammad Yamin iraqi

An excellent write Asma. I am really impressed. A thought provoking poem. Great work.

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Jimmy Arnold

Asmaa,

Like always, a poem (perfectly) submitted and by a poetess with no flaw, A very pretty poem, from a very modest lady, truly perfect you are...Great job as always....A lot of rhyming and for all the right reasons....

With the kindest,

Jimmy

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Asmaa As-siddiq

thank you jimmy, always happy to  receive your comments!

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Louise Carroll

There is perfection in imperfection :) This poem is really good and I love the honesty and emotion, lovely flow. Keep writing and sharing please, enjoying your writing. :)

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John Boyle

You may not be perfect but your poem certainly is...  Congrats to you also.. :)

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Glenn Marchand

No one is perfect. You capture that sentiment very well. 

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Louise Carroll

This is beautiful and so so true. Well done and congrats on being Nommed.  Well deserved. x

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B C

At last! Years of being tormented by my own ceaseless imperfection. Thank you for allowing me a brief reprieve and a reason to bask in my imperfection! 

Well done! Bravo!

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Curious Onlooker

Well done my friend, I love the message, the execution and conclusion 5 stars
love and respect
CO

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