The light of life

true and simple 

good write

lovely poem, lovely message congrats x

short,simple and straight to the point  good write asmaa     tina x

Hi Asma, well done.

The poem has a universal effect, reflects a common truth. Under the sky, consuming the same air, having the same colour in blood, why do we fight each other? There were a lot of criminals and war loving emperors , what did they gain? where are they now? 

This poem is a good message , lead a lovable life in the short period, all the best, sayed

Hey Asmaa,

• A very pretty poem in deed, just as in a box of crayons of (64)pieces, with the absence of any one single color, the box is rendered incomplete and lacking perfection as a whole.Thus given credence to the fact, that all colors,(just as all human beings) has their purpose and place in life and without any one individually needed  person, are color,that (perfect) picture we all seek. Just as a piece, is in relations to a puzzle, it (just as we), will never be complete.......Nice poem Asmaa and you never, (as always) fall short, of your mark of, getting your point across......I did not have any specific favorite lines, because the entire poem, was beautifully spoken.....

Take Care,

Jim

This is such a lovely simple yet meaningful poem. Well done and congrats on being nomineted. :)

Beautiful... If only we all thought this way...

Peace and love always...

John.

So very true.  A wonderful inspiring write.