Poem -
I AM ROSE
Like 13 Pin it 6PLANT ME IN THE GROUNDĀ
YOU WILL FIND ME ALL
ROUND THE WORLD
FOR I AM ROSE,SO PICK ME SMELL
ME AND TELL ME
YOU LOVE MEĀ
FOR I AM ROSE,AND WHEN SUNSHINES
IN THE MORNING ONĀ
THIS ROES UNTIL
THE EVENING CLOSES
FOR I AM ROSE,THE ROSE ON THE HILL
HAS LIFE BY THE SEA
FOR I AM ROSE.THE RAINBOW COMEĀ
AND GOES BUT THEĀ
ROSE IS SO LOVELYĀ
FOR I AMĀ ROSE.Ā
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Comments
Stunning and beautiful Greg xx
Thank you so much Marion
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Thank you jill
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Wow Greg I LOVED reading this. So beautiful. "For I am rose" for me this suggested a sense of peace with oneself. To find love in oneself can be the hardest thing. But they say, in order to love another, we must first love ourselves. That means seeing the beauty in ourselves. Which I felt this poem shined a beautiful light on. A powerful poem Greg, delicately pennedĀ
wonderfulĀ
Pinned šĀ
Gwen xĀ
Thank you so much GwendolineĀ
for liking my poem
it means a lot to me
It really does Thank you for reading
Your personification of a rose really does tell a beautiful message Greg. You penned a wonderful piece ā¤š·š·
Thank you againā¤ļøš¹
Thank you again IĀ
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jill like this poemĀ
oh well
Greg this is such a beautiful read. Gwen's expression on this piece is spot on. It's a deep powerful write subtly laid out with a rose. Pinned! Px
Thank so much PratibhaĀ
This means a lot to me
Thank you very much for reading
Welcome my friendĀ
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i like to thank fishĀ
sparrowsongĀ
Jim the lad
LorrisĀ
for likeing my poem
it means lot to meĀ
thank you aginĀ
Very muchly enjoyed Greg .. Beautifully well crafted and not a single ugly thorn in sight my Friend ..
NevilleĀ
Neville Thank you so much this means a lot to me thank you for reading
You really are most welcome Greg, my pleasure entirely ... N :)
OH My Goodness GREG!!....I can understand why there are so many comments on this piece.....there is a truly magical quality in the metering and the delivery of this.....and I truly believe if you were to break your lines just a little differently you may have a true masterpiece on your hands here.....WoW!....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......truly beautiful idea VERY well conveyed!!...well done my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!...T xoĀ : )
Thank you Tony
so what do you talk about
Ā Break my lines a little differently
Like how
Ā Reads like a self reinforcing personification of one's inner spirit Greg and beautifully composed and delivered.
A real dream weave of a poem with a rose that reaches out and beguiles each reader.
Superb to read and poetry kudos to you Greg for writing a touch of poetry class.
Full honours respectfully given and most deserving and more than well earnt.
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Thank you so much Shaun
This means a lot to me
Very glad You liked it
Greg I believe it to be up there with your best and your writing is going from strength to strength and is so damned good to see.
And apologies for not spending quality time on here at the present, just doing DIY on rooms, after work, for the family Christmas gathering and playing hit and run on here when time allows.
Can't be in two places at the same time old adage and all that.
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