Poem -
I dont know what to do
These days run together.
Uneventful, through this chaotic weather.
Your the rainbow, after the storm.
The fire lighting my way, keeping me warm.
Yet here i am, still running from myself.
Feelings ive stocked away, left on a shelf.
things thats changed me, resentments ive left behind.
I've never been the grudge holding kind.
I'm just pulling strands of this fabric,
knowing ill unravel, and fall apart.
Cause im having trouble escaping my mind,
even when your holding my heart.
There's something to be said for peace,
the security you give me, the strength i feel because of you.
So clear and confident in your arms,
That when I'm back to this everyday grind, I dont know what to do.
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Comments
Hello, Debbi.
You begin your melancholy musing featuring an aabb rhyme scheme for stanzas one and two. Then, for reasons unbeknownst to us, you abruptly shift gears to an abcb rhyme scheme for stanza three, and finish off your poem the same way—an abcb scheme.
It all works, however, and reads smoothly enough.
Well done...
~Dean Kuch ♥❤️~?~❤️♥
Thank you!
Great poem. Very well written.
Thanks hun!